View Full Version : The Wall , Martin Kandora (3D)
12-31-2008, 02:07 PM
Title: The Wall
Name: Martin Kandora
Software: 3ds max, VRay
Its an horror scene with a creature or monster that brakes through a wall. The lighting set is like in many horror movies. I try to make an dramatic scene I hope you guys like it and comments are more than welcome its my first scene I ever did so please be honest
01-01-2009, 06:33 PM
I am a big fan of movie inspired images and I like your overall concept. The things that don't work in the image for me are the lighting and the composition. Maybe a slight back-light on the monster might help, as well as some specular highlights on the rocks. Plus a slight fill on the monster... As for the composition, I would have liked something a little more dramatic, maybe even tighter. Perhaps an angle and a composition that convey a sense of urgency and surprise.
I really like the grill area though, as well as the ceiling with the lamps!
Fine work overall. Keep at it!
01-01-2009, 07:48 PM
He thanks for the reply. I will try the same scene with a light spot through the wall for more dramatic. I will keep that one update thanks :-) for your advices I hope I can make it
01-02-2009, 07:17 AM
ohh yess very good jobbb
01-02-2009, 11:05 AM
Visheh Mantal you were right it looks much better with the light throught the wall I will update the pictures soon the render time get doubled so I have to wait but thx
And thx to you aswell Souledge I appreciate that
01-02-2009, 02:27 PM
Hey guys thanks for all the hints and advices the update is now in my portfolio I hope you like the changes I think it get much better but please decided it for yourself and thanks in advance for all your comments you guys are awesome
01-02-2009, 03:27 PM
A drastic change my friend! My personal favourite is the second one (the one with more fill). Good work! I see you are not easily daunted and like to keep going! Glad to know my comments helped!
01-02-2009, 05:31 PM
Please look at my new update and tell me what you think about its an combination from solution 1 and 2 hope you like it :-)
01-02-2009, 11:45 PM
a new idea for the wall scene from me maybe you like it its in my portfolio
01-04-2009, 03:50 AM
I think i am done hope you guys like my new work and comments are still welcome :-)
01-04-2009, 03:50 AM
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