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cowtrix
12-30-2008, 12:09 PM
Hi there, I do believe this is the first time I've ever posted in this forum so be gentle :blush:.

Anyway, here's a piece of stencil art I've made, so only 3 colours (and the white doesn't get sprayed, so technically two colours). Anyway, just hoping for an outside view and critique, as well as if anyone gets the message of the whole thing. Honestly I'm not sure whether to post this in the 3D forum or not because a lot of it was drawn from a base model, but I think I might get more valid advice here considering the medium.

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/5473/36776832xt6.jpg
Advarsky
12-30-2008, 12:58 PM
It hurts my eyes!!! O_o
CybrGfx
12-30-2008, 08:29 PM
Too high contrast, you've lost too much of the tank.

All you have now is two tank treads with neon green dollar signs on them, and a disembodied gun barrel. It just hurts the eyes without direction or meaning.

Need to work on the composition, the values, and the focal point.
~C
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