Noob Digital Painting - WIP

[KazuyaMochu]

link's dead!

[atom_up]

This is lookin really good. I love the darks and lights in this one, makes it dynmanic and kind of gives that suspense feeling. I can't wait to see the finished product, keep up the good work.

[Carbon]

I love it except for the fact its kinda dark and theres no backgreound looks like it just ends into space..but thats about it. Nice work!

[mattregnier]

Fill up the background with some additional buildings and ditch the starry environment. The pic is really really going somewhere. Gives you the sense that the man is truly on the run.

[alikzam13]

Really nice job. Looks good. The hallway the guy is in looks plain for some reason. I dont know how to fix it tho :/ Mybe somebody else has an idea¿

[William b. Hand]

I agree... real nice mood and very interesting composition! You might help the hallway with some small devices, such as light switches or air-conditioning vents or something... Maybe something small that suggests what sort of building this is? a sign that reads "keep door locked"? Something more, though.
What bothers me most is the building out the window...I think more work on detailing that is needed.. and I agree that it's a little odd to see a sky fulla stars out there... Definitely some more buildings, even if its just a sillouhette against some overcast sky... Or the distant twinkling lights of other vehicles...
Keep in mind that if you're in a city you're unlikely to see much in the way of celestial bodies, other than the sun and the moon, there's just too much ambient light around.
Again, real nice sense of place and story! :)

[Groady]

Thanks for the comments. Here's the updated version. This is pretty close to my original concept. Just in the process of putting the finishing touches on it.

http://www.fatarts.com/newpic-flat11.jpg

[alikzam13]

frikin' eh man. That looks awsome. Everything good about the picture remained but you added so much to it to make it even better. The bloodtrail is really awsome. Some of the little blood droplets are a little too hard edge and dont looks fluidlike enough. But still really nice. Keep it up.

[BiTMAP]

the blud puddle, how did it get thar? if he layed thar he would have been seen, and if he was shot ther the glass isn't broken.

[eLm0]

looks great now i agree with the above little details that count;)

[Groady]

Bitmap: He has stumbled through the doors and hit the wall slumping to the floor. Assume he was shot/stabbed/bitten in another room.

Thanks for the great feedback. You can view the final in the finished section here. (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=72614)

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