Christmas - since you behaved, Alex Pow (2D)

[claygun]

I think there is something going on with her shadow, it doesn't quite add up. Other than that, it's a sweet piece of work, like it.

[Uo1]

Thank you,
you are right, there is a lot to improve.


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[FRENZIEDmind]

Nice work man. Love the style.

crit:
more contrast would help santa's-helper stand out from the background. Other than that good work.

[Uo1]

Nice work man. Love the style.

crit:
more contrast would help santa's-helper stand out from the background. Other than that good work.


Yeah, thanks for the critique! :)

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[knekker]

-first of all, the bag she's holding could use alot more details, there's not enought clear wrinkles.
-you should look into anatomi, obviously her leggs are way too long.
-the lighting could use some more work, Its really flat, cause of all the bright light from all angles.
- the little logo on her suit, looks like it's stamped onto the picture, it needs a sense of 3d volume.
- as several people above pointed out, your whole shadow thing that you have going on, is wrong, and needs more details.
-lastly there's missing a background, i mean... if one isn't interested in his work, and just slaps background up consisting nothing else but purple dots, why even bother posting it at all?

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