Male Head Finished

[neonghost]

the model looks really good - the ear looks possibly a little too far back, but that just might be me.

the texture seam between his face and hair line is a little too obvious, you could fade it in instead - and the forehead wrinkles appear to have no corresponding bump map, and therefore look too cartoony with just a colour map.

nice work

[pit]

Real quick: Ear to small and as pointed out to far back and I think the lower eyelids are to bulky in a wrong way. Stuff that is easily corrected. That aside, your char looks really great :thumbsup:
2 questions: Poly by poly this time? Do you consider the texturing finished?

[That Adrian Guy]

It's really good, but I agree about the blue discoloration of the skin.

Also... what happened to his cheek bone? His skeletal structure is unusual.

Adding any eyelashes?

[modestmouse]

lose the semmetry in the middle of the shave bears it looks weird

[sanciok]

Pit:
not really poly by poly... I just mixed up techniques: I modeled the eyes starting from a poly and so for the mouth and the ear, for the nose I started from a cube, then I joined everything together, using the poly by poly technique.
If I consider the texturing finished? Yes, because I don't think I can do better than this.

My way of working is this: when I consider a model finished, if I work on it again I never get something better, so I prefer leaving it as it is and start a new one, considering previous errors and the tips+advices that I get from you all.

Adrian: I made cheekbones on purpose this way because I wanted him to look "naturally" ugly.
Thanks for your advices!
Keep posting!
Cheers,
Millo
:beer: :beer: :thumbsup:

[That Adrian Guy]

I still feel you should fix the cheek bones = )

[geoffb]

only critique i have is the texture or lighting mkes him look too plastic. i assume its probably the specularity of the textures, but it could be the lights.

geoff

[AdamT]

Originally posted by That Adrian Guy
I still feel you should fix the cheek bones = )
I like the cheekbones. A little unusual, but not outside the realm of actual actual anatomy.

[fretshredder]

DAYUM! That's a lookin' sweet. My only crit would be that of the forehead wrinkles. The forehead looks like it was painted rather than looking wrinkly...could be me though. Afterall it is 2:30 am as I type this

/gz

[sanciok]

Thanks for posting guys!!

geoffb: i'll try some more rendering, y're rigth!!!

[geoffb]

i look forward to seeing them:beer:

[Katachi]

http://www.the3ddesigner.de/bilder/testah.jpg

cheeks are really a bit too unnatural imo. It seems as if there are no cheeks at all... :)

lips need some more volume, they are a bit too plain.

overall very nice anyway.

Best
Samir:thumbsup:

[ThirdEye]

Agreed with all Samir said, except for the lips, i really like them now :p

[bobzilla]

sanciock: My way of working is this: when I consider a model finished, if I work on it again I never get something better, so I prefer leaving it as it is and start a new one, considering previous errors and the tips+advices that I get from you all.

I WISH I could work that way! I get obssessed with what I'm working on and then stick in forum crits I never get anything done!

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