Steampunk Myths and Legends Entry: Mohammad Coochaki

[coochaki]

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Hey Guys..
this is my initial concept for steampunk challenge.
story in my image is about kave & Fereydun's army that they revolted against the tyrannical king ?Zahhak?,

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kaveh
see more :http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fereydun
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kargadan

looking for any suggestion or critique...

[3mm]

nice start Mohammad
it will turning to be great entry i think

looking forward for more great work:lightbulb

[coochaki]

3mm:thanks .. I'll try my best!...

[minastris]

amazing, truly astonishing for the starting point.
keep it up dude.:applause:

[coochaki]

minastris: thanks ..
Hey guys i need you feedbacks...
any suggestion or critique....

[alshakno]

Hey Mohammad

a big good luck for you

nice detailed concept

maybe a closer shot would be great, there are some unused areas around the scene

let rock man!

keep up

[coochaki]

alshakno:maybe a closer shot would be great, there are some unused areas around the scene hi alshakno i'm really glad see you here i agree with you there is some unused area in my image I'll fix it in next post, now I'm trying to clean up and add more details on my concept to start painting...
maybe adding some mechanical stuff in sky like flying machines will fix it a little bit...
thanks you for your comment!...

[coochaki]

hey guys i've another story

that is about Goethe's Faust that makes Homunculus!..

see more :
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Faust
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Homunculus

[coochaki]

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/1/17/Faust_image_19thcentury.jpg
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Faust_image_19thcentury.jpg
19th century engraving of Goethe's Faust and Homunculus
could you tell me wich story is better?
i need your suggestions...
thanks..

[Citizen Suicide]

Both are interesting for different reasons. kaveh & Fereydun seems to lend itself more to an epic sort of picture, with a lot going on, which might be hard to pull off in the remaining time though. I think Faust gives more oppertunity to creative interpretation ;).

[coochaki]

ok guys!...

I choosed first story & i'm working on it right now...:thumbsup:

[wamo]

Hey , it's Kindda an awesome start man..!

My 2 cents :
You need more details at some places i think(you know filing the scene lil bit more in this big battle), and your choice of the story is Great as the story. Keep going on man.. :thumbsup:

[coochaki]

thanks ehsaan glad to see you here...:thumbsup:

[coochaki]

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Hey guys ...
this is new update,hope you like it.
looking for any suggestion or critics...

[alshakno]

Nice process Mohammad

show us more big updates

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