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cpiboontum
06-21-2003, 09:24 AM
I am just finished another modeling, texturing, and rendering work for an architecture design firm. Would you love to be spending on that beach? :):):)

http://www.visual3dfx.com/CGtalk/Emerald_Entrance_Signature.jpg

-VISuAL3DFX

NanoGator
06-29-2003, 08:09 AM
It's nice, but it looks a little unfinished. I had to stare at it a minute to realize why. The sky's bare! A photo of clouds back there'd go a long way.

Might I suggest altering the angle of the camera a little bit so it's not so straight on? That'd make the shadows created by the wooden beams look a little more interesting.

TheGreenGiant
06-29-2003, 10:02 AM
I worked a bit in architecture. Here's my comments:

NANO is right about the sky.

The drive way's colour is a bit odd.. it ought to be darker. And maybe work the mesh a little so it joins the ground a little better.

The Grass could do with a bit of work.

and finally.

The water in the background could be a wee bit greener to bring it out.

and one more.

COMPOSITION... the shot looks unbalanced. I'd show more sky too.

cpiboontum
06-29-2003, 02:07 PM
Hey Guys:

Thanks... I will make some adjustment as you guys suggested and will posted a new on here again soon.

-VISuAL3DFX

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