The world first Super Heroe born of the stone age, Brent laki francis schuster (2D)

[phoenix]

sweet picture man


regards

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[khanfirst]

love the colour, pose, and the monkeys facial are very funny, cool looking super kid looks good for a movie idea

nice one

[FRENZIEDmind]

Nice illustration. Looks like a lot of work.

crit:
I didn't give you a low rating but, I'll give you some constructive criticism. The anatomy of the dinosaur doesn't look right. His legs appear too short and his upper arms look humanistic. Compositionally the image needs more refinement to make it interesting to look at. As it is, the clouds split the frame exactly in half, the perfectly central and sideways portrayal of the dinosaur (and the straight-on frontal and central location of the super-cave-kid) do not seem exciting and lead to visual stagnation. The mind's eye gets board quickly of such a "regular" layout and presentation.

The most interesting elements of the illustrations are the dinosaur's head and the monkeys. There's lots of dynasism and interest.

[jordineo]

sorry wrong message

[nzrkiwi]

Thanx frenziedmind i totally aggree with the cloud formation splitting up the composition well noted! I originally had tyranusaurus arms and feet, But decided to add deltoids, biceps, triceps and traps and make the feet big like clown shoes to give a funny appeal but it kinda backfired on me and that too is now well noted! Your totally correct about the dinosaur posture it could of been more dynamic and not to symmetrical to the toddler, this had made me more aware of the compositional design aspects and how important it is and how my other works had lacked the dynamic and interesting appeal:)

Cheers

Knowledge is power!!!

[nzrkiwi]

Him i did the alteration i got rid of the cloud in the middle which gives the picture less background distraction i lenghthen the dinosaur leg. I would like to mention this is more of a fantasy creature design than the real thing. I also just re-position the moon to give the lighting more sensibility to the light falling on his belly but still kept the secondary lighting on his head and upper spine because it look good i add al ight source for htis soon! i added
a part dragon and part tyradactor creature on the sky with not to much detail! When i add the altered picture to my Gallery it also change here so hence this reply!

[FRENZIEDmind]

Looks better! :thumbsup:

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