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tsvetkovd 12-16-2008, 08:53 PM This will be a catalog for one fashion designer. It's the first work. Hope you'll like it.
http://pics.livejournal.com/tsvetkovd/pic/0003c9w9
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JJASSO
12-17-2008, 12:20 AM
welcome to the forums Dimitriy, it looks nice, I would like to see just the background matte painting with out the foreground elements, just to see the details and effects and everything, I think your foreground elements need some better integration though
looking forward to see the backdrop :)
tsvetkovd
12-17-2008, 06:30 AM
Thank you. It's a pity you don't like the way the foreground is integrated, I tried to compose them good... I think you don't like the fence that is in a warm gamma. Here is the background you asked for
http://pics.livejournal.com/tsvetkovd/pic/0003e7da
JJASSO
12-17-2008, 06:47 AM
looking good, I never said I didn't like the FG elements I just said that they need some more work for a good integration, actually I think you need some more interactive lighting from the moon lamps you have in the fence, good job !
tsvetkovd
12-17-2008, 12:53 PM
Oh, thank you for an advice. I think you're right. Many things can be done to make this work better. It's my first matte painting, so I will do my best to do the following works much better. Thanx! :)
imissmyjuno
12-17-2008, 03:32 PM
I'll say it again -- top notch stuff :thumbsup:
tsvetkovd
12-17-2008, 09:40 PM
Thanx! Spasibo!
Rockhoppermedia
12-18-2008, 03:05 PM
Awesome for a first matte!
tsvetkovd
12-18-2008, 03:28 PM
Awesome for a first matte!
Thanks a lot
eyecon
12-19-2008, 06:43 AM
Frist matte? Well your doing pretty well so far.
I just saw one bit though that might help. You seem to have too much of a fog on the background mouintains on the left side. You might coonsider lowering that down a bit. or have the same effect on the other side, but you would loose all that detail.
Hope this helps, cheer man!
tsvetkovd
12-19-2008, 10:06 AM
Frist matte? Well your doing pretty well so far.
I just saw one bit though that might help. You seem to have too much of a fog on the background mouintains on the left side. You might coonsider lowering that down a bit. or have the same effect on the other side, but you would loose all that detail.
Hope this helps, cheer man!
Oh, thanks a lot! I think you're right about fog. I thought it would add some atmosphere, but maybe I overdid it. Thank you for your attention.
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