Priestess

[EndoTouch]

I like it, its got a good fantasy feel. I think that the lipstick is too saturated. Gonna paint a background for it?

[CybrGfx]

Speedpainting does nothing to help your accuracy skills, tho'...

This has horrid anatomy.
The shoulders are simply bad. Bad shape, bad size, bad placement, bad balance.
The neck is too thin, and the hair looks weird on it.
The breasts are too low and droopy.
The hands and feet are too small.
The hips are displaced and malformed.

You also have severe lighting and shadow issues, since you do not have a clearly defined light source.

This really isn't much of anything at present, except a really rough concept. You have no background, you have no decent anatomy; at best, all you really have here, is a character rough.

So now, you need to at least go back and redraw this with better proportions, and rough in a background.
That's why speedpaints aren't that great unless your skills are developed enough to accurately render things quickly...

~C

[EndoTouch]

I think the hair causing the wonky neck area, loosen it up to make it distinct. CyberGfx usually has a good eye though so I dunno.

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