character : Jack

[Shotty]

Wow, really nice. 2 things though

- Hair looks like lots of flat objects bent backwards (suppose to look like that?)
- Scar over eye is pretty cliched :)

[fluxxx]

i working ,working better than now ^^;

[Jjack]

grat job , i like the expression , the only thing is the hair look like plastic
otherwise , awesome model

[fluxxx]

i modifing ..^^ hair ..

repost soon, modified image

[rollmops]

Impressiv model.
Don't forget to work on the skin shader.
Some adjustment of the reaction to light will make more realistic (less shiny!)
keep on!;)

[BadKarma]

i dont no if your going for a "realistic" or "Cartoony/realistic" if the character is ment to be cartoony, i think i think the hair looks great very unique way of doing it, other wise i would change it.

as for the scar, i like it ! the little dots either side of it, are they ment to be like hmmm... stitches marks? if so very nice u have gone into some good detail :D

BadKarma

[avalon]

really wonderful work:buttrock: :buttrock:

[avalon]

really wonderful work:buttrock: :buttrock:

[Renzsu]

Really cool, you could put him in Tekken right away!! :buttrock:

[fluxxx]

i wanted "Cartoony/realistic" style, and unique not realistic

so skin shader pure shiny , hair is plastic

shot animation is comic style


always working "Cartoony/realistic" style , but i try to "realistic" go on



thanx for critique :)

[Johnny_Cannuck]

Looks good. The hairline and lip edges are a little sharp though.

:beer:

[Joss]

ok Mr. Maya man.

you didn't by chance use a ramp shader for the eye did you?

or perhaps a projection map?

looks good!

[LordDubu]

Originally posted by Shotty

- Hair looks like lots of flat objects bent backwards (suppose to look like that?)
- Scar over eye is pretty cliched :)

Yeah, but some cliche works. In this case... this one works. Keep the scarr. Love the stich marks too, that's great.

This looks like a lot of the models coming out of korean animators lately... i think the hair looks fine, since I guess you're going for cartoon/realish... that whole "square soft" genre look as it were.

But I think the problem is the skin throws us for a loop... It makes the model look like more of an attempt for realism, and that is why I think everyone is complaining about the hair.

Personally I like the hair, the scarr is cool too. And I love his expression.. .especailly the cocked eye... that's great...

keep up the good work... "FIGHTING!!"

[fluxxx]

johnny Cannuck,

yes, ^^

joss ,

eye map ,,only map this case (i used simply ramp texture )


Lord Dubu,
yes, i attempt for realism, but project is comic action ,

combine realistic model , add map ,add hair,,,

it's not real, not catoony ,, @_@ , a mess

because my skill is bad

[I animate]

I think your skill is very good. I like your style. The hair looks great.

The skin texture needs a little work but this model is done very nicely. GOOD JOB !!!

:bounce: :applause: :bounce:

[TNTJack]

Looks great!

I am not an experienced modeller, so I cannot give any useful feedback.

But I have one question: did you use Johny Depp´s face as a reference?

Keep up the good work

[fluxxx]

I animate,
thanx,
my texture work is so bad, keeep on training
next time ,i hope , good image for you



TNTJack,

hi, no reference used ,
it all came out of my imagination
i don't like any reference image , it's a habit
it's a bad habit
:annoyed:

[Jamaludin]

hey fluxx, I cant really comment cause I still lack in skills, but I love he style of the model, and the hair is magnificent its way cool. The expression and look of the model is really nice, the whole model looks great, keep it up and good luck !

[fluxxx]

thanks , comment ^^

cheer up you too

[digital NUT]

Hey excellent work!:buttrock:

But...I think that his left eye is kinda far from his nose....it's probably just me.:rolleyes:

[LordDubu]

But that's what I love about it! His face is asymmetrical... human's have asymmetrical faces! that's great, he doesn't just look "mirrored"

[WheelChairNinja]

wow
really amazing! :drool:

I can't wait to see the animation
keep up the good work ^_^

[twitchy]

it reminds me of final fantasy.........its an awsome model......waiting for the whole body know! :D

[fluxxx]

whole body image

non smooth -

http://fluxxx.cafe24.com/bbs/data/pic/jack_pers.jpg
http://fluxxx.cafe24.com/bbs/data/pic/jack_front.jpg

[The Cross]

Reminds me of Tetsuo from Akira.

The length of his limbs seem to be correct. It's a nice model.

[Xaint]

Originally posted by The Cross
Reminds me of Tetsuo from Akira.

The length of his limbs seem to be correct. It's a nice model.

Definiately Tetsuo!
You have a style I'd always like to develop. Cool!:cool:

[ill_logic]

tetsuo?! eh... i'm not too sure about that. if anything, i'd say it looks a bit more like vash the stampede. although, in the very first pic posted at the top of the thread, the collar of the jacket made me expect something out of michael jackson's thriller or something lol :thumbsup:
it's really bad ass though. very nice style! i like the boots.
keep it up!
:surprised -ill

[Darakusan]

Very nice work / style! :bounce:

Some crits: The biceps looks odd to me.. especially the area where the biceps join the armpit when the hand is down. Also the lower part of the cloak lacks depth.

Ok this is just some small pts i felt about. Keep it up and this will be a very good work!:thumbsup:

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