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Moevision
12-08-2008, 04:04 PM
Mo Qian is entered in the "Steampunk Myths and Legends" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/steampunk/view_entries.php?challenger=17252)

Latest Update: Final Image: Final
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1232407362_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=5629682#post5629682)

Moevision
12-10-2008, 01:32 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1228919559_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1228919559_large.jpg)

1st sketch, trying to come up with interesting idea/composition

Moevision
12-10-2008, 01:36 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1228919770_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1228919770_large.jpg)

add more spaces in the bottom area. not very happy so far since the space is somewhat limited.

Moevision
12-10-2008, 01:37 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1228919877_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1228919877_large.jpg)

change the composition, I like it better than my previous one, add a little more definition, trying to set the mood for the piece

Moevision
12-12-2008, 01:41 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1229092859_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1229092859_large.jpg)

changing composition and a few other elements

Moevision
12-12-2008, 01:42 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1229092955_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1229092955_large.jpg)

still not too happy with it now...needs more tweaking

Moevision
12-27-2008, 03:17 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1230394624_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1230394624_large.jpg)

still working on lots of ideas, in terms of composition/lighting/elements.

Hopefully I can get a lot more done during the Christmas vacation

Moevision
12-28-2008, 09:47 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1230504473_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1230504473_large.jpg)

reworked on the ship/robot shape a little bit. Added some terrain variation

Moevision
01-05-2009, 12:53 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1231163635_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1231163635_large.jpg)

tighten the ship a little bit more, adding more elements that unify the theme. Worked on background and colors.

SynthOrange
01-07-2009, 11:51 AM
Vivid colours, but it's kind of hard to work out what's going on with such small images?

Moevision
01-07-2009, 01:35 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1231338917_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1231338917_large.jpg)

making more changes again, not a good idea since there is only 5 days left...
by looking at other people's work, I think my main character lacks a sense of motion because it has no arms/legs. I am trying to add them and hopefully it can be done soon.

Moevision
01-13-2009, 01:32 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1231857169_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1231857169_large.jpg)

The good news is I got a few extra days to improve everything.
tighten up details. still want to change a lot of elements in this piece

Moevision
01-19-2009, 10:22 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1232407362_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/17252/17252_1232407362_medium.jpg)

well, this is the end,
I kind of stuck in the background story of my piece pretty late during competition. However I was thinking about it too loosely and it slowed down things quite a few. I have some other ideas on sketch book but I was not able to paint them in...I think there are a lot of things I can improve..
I am still not happy with the lighting and colors.
I've learned new things by looking at other people's entry, and I have to read through them once again later at some point.
This is my first time seriously doing a competition like this, I really enjoy the process and I hope to do more in the future.

JeffZugale
01-19-2009, 10:24 PM
Looks good! Good luck!!

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