Teaser

[baradara]

Anyone?????

[Gotmilk]

Hello baradara and welcome.

Crits: The intro name "Dimitar Genov". It takes 36 seconds to animate the name (maybe make that shorter) and when you display the name its is shown less than 1 second. I had to pause the video to read entire name.

About your animation. At the start i could not understand what were you trying to display. At first i thought it was a fire. Watching it for a second time i realized that they are clouds. (i apologize if i am wrong). Camera moving was quick. I think if you make a slower camera movment around the mountain and the object on that mountain would be nicer. Also it helps if you would add a lot of details. You could also work on lighting and rendering techniques. I dont know anything about that but you should find plenty of tutorials out there to make your overall picture look prettier. Also that teaser did not tease me :)

I wish you good luck with your progress and please post your WIP-s

[baradara]

Thank you for your critics. Yeah, you are right about the logo writing, it does take long and I wasn't sure if it should fit in there. I think it was obvious that these were clouds.
Of course, I intented them to be moving really fast to create this sort of effect. Like when you are flying in a dream. I dunno, I have seen a number of teasers and theatrical trailers which bear the same traits like the ones I tried to put into my work. It was my intention that everything should be moving fast to create a "what was that?!" feel. Maybe, I got carried away and people can't understand what am I trying to convey.
I do agree that I still have a lot to learn but I think that I have achieved the effect I was after.
I am sorry if I didn't "tease" you enough with my clip ;) anyway, I will try to be more convincing next time:p

PS: The "object" was supposed to be a woman in a cloak watching at the sailing ship.

Cheers

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