Desmond Photo

[mixtus]

good work.
I dig the pattern that you use while the photos load.

here are my comment.
on the enter screen - the "Get Flash 6"
should be smaller - it demands the same amount
of visual attention as the enter buttons.
maybe pull the flash 6 into its own block - or shirk
it down or reduce the brightness. Do something
to make it less important then the other buttons.

contact button - since you are not
changing the menu size and shape - it
does not need to cycle all the way back to the intro
of the menu. It can just transform back to the menu
without shrinking. ( this is picky - but it would reduce
the transition time and look cleaner.

The woosh sound i think is a little too loud.
Maybe it's my subwoofer, but it gets annoying to
hear the loud deep swoosh everytime I click a photo.

great work over all - very fluid movements.
did you do the actionscripting on the photo
buttons from scratch?

i also check out http://www.slayerment.com
it said your still in high school - that is scary that your
already building sites this good. Are you planning
on going to school after high school?













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[izmal]

that really good..young and talented.i see bright future ahead...hmm....
oh..here are my comment:
i like the interactive..but sometimes,its annoying/boring..(all those waiting).:rolleyes:
The woosh sound i think is a little too loud.
i agree..old people can get heart attack.
still, i think you have done a good job!like the 'slayerment.com':applause:

[magic6435]

mesa like :)

[slayerment]

Thanks for all the great feedback guys!

mixtus - Thanks for the review. The buttons were coded from scratch. I just finished up high school last week and yes, I'm going to college over at www.uat.edu in Arizona. Going to work on getting a BA in Multimedia with an emphasis on Digital Video Production. :)

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