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charlie brown
06-19-2003, 12:41 AM
more of the same.. id like to work the first one more, so any suggestions are well received :D
both PS 7
http://www.artbyandy.com/lakemech.jpg

http://www.artbyandy.com/sidemech.jpg

unLevel
06-19-2003, 06:33 AM
ooo...grungy...me like! :thumbsup:

Mackan
06-19-2003, 04:01 PM
i like your style :)

Rubberduckie
06-19-2003, 04:11 PM
Heyy...i really groove ur stuff dude......the pics have a feel n mood to em.....erm...altho ur second pic...the mechs hand is a tad short dun u fink? :shrug: mmm...but nice stuff overall...:thumbsup: The first pic is Fan-ta-bu-lous!

Rubberduckie
06-19-2003, 04:20 PM
Heyy...i really groove ur stuff dude......the pics have a feel n mood to em.....erm...altho ur second pic...the mechs hand is a tad short dun u fink? :shrug: mmm...but nice stuff overall...:thumbsup: The first pic is Fan-ta-bu-lous!

madcow
06-19-2003, 08:20 PM
I like the first one better as well! gr8 "pic":beer:

RADiator
06-19-2003, 11:24 PM
I just love that stile! Good work here man! :thumbsup: humbsup:

charlie brown
06-22-2003, 12:18 PM
thanks for the replies guys, any ideas how to take first further.

MikkoK
06-23-2003, 01:08 AM
About the first pic, I would suggest:

-Make the shadows less black. Your style is strongly graphic and it works but some light in the dark areas could easily add some more depth. Especially outdoors (where this dude obviously is) shadows are not usually this dark.

-Define a horizon line there. Make the background appear further from the character by lessening contrasts and reducing saturation. You can exaggerate it for stronger effect.

-About the gun, it could be cooler if it was pointed a little more forward towards the 'camera' (sounds silly, I know). Some foreshortening and bingo, the character could look to stand out more.

-I would also consider the colors a bit, I'm not so much into pink :D (I'm kidding of course)

Hope this helps!

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