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marcuse
12-01-2008, 08:44 AM
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Title: Bitch and a Bomb
Name: Marcus Edström
Country: Sweden
Software: Photoshop

Hi all!

Here's another example of what I do to pass time while waiting for the phone to ring.

Any comments and critique is greatly appreciated! Personally, I'm not too pleased with concept and composition - as usual. I'd be really happy to hear suggestions from you on how the concept could have been improved.

/m.

phoenix
12-02-2008, 03:28 AM
Girl is very nicely painted good job

regards

zenonithus
12-02-2008, 07:03 PM
Great job with the girl! The rim lighting is particularly nice. though the mushroom bomb and backdrop look poor in comparison, which is a shame. hope you can redo that part.

AndyH
12-04-2008, 03:38 PM
Great work! I like the girl - nice pose and cheeky expression!
I kinda agree with Eddpereti though - the mushroom cloud doesnt look quite as polished as the girl, which is quite important as it is the focal point of the image.

I'd like to see similar pieces though - you have a pretty appealing character here, even though she is detonating a nuclear bomb!

marcuse
12-08-2008, 01:31 PM
Thanks for the feedback, all! I agree fully with you and will take the critique with me to the next picture. I think the pic got the rating it deserved... average.

/m.

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