Steampunk Myths and Legends Entry: Cheoljoo Lee

[paratrooper]

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Based on the story,David and Goliath.
just did concept sketch and will make 3D model first to reserch the lighting and the real layout. cheers all of you!

[DTRAN]

.............yep. nothing short of awesomazing!!
I love the scale and the angle you chose and even though this is just a rough colour pass, looks badass!! I cant wait!

[Soggyclog]

Love it Lee!

I really like the overexposed look to the sketch... pretty.

[azazel]

I've had a bit of trouble reading David's pose and bike - that could be clearer. Otherwise, looks great, like the idea.

[mrpeace]

Love the concept...GOOD WORK! :applause:

Focus on the camera angle more. Good luck!

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[paratrooper]

Thanks for all of you, the feedback. I will be update when I do 3d modeling and actual work.
Cheers.

[Micro26]

Great atmospere ,pose and with alot of motion.Love your works man.
Wainting to see how this evolves

[pauloduarte]

Very nice concept.

Good luck.

[chilombiano]

ho. that looks awesome as it is!. you sure you need to go 3d and not just keep working on th paint? just asking

[paratrooper]

about the Chilombiano's question..
will keep it 2D painting,but going to make the 3D as well in order to reserch the lighting and layout,camera angle. the reserching will be realy helpful for the painting. Thanks guys.

[JackZhang]

one word: absolutely beautiful!

[adriendebos]

That's a very good start Lee! I'm really looking forward to seeing more of your entry, that's gonna be very inspiring I'm sure.
Your first sketch reminds me Ashley Wood's robots, I love this style. I'm really looking forward for more! Good luck in the contest!

[Rupy]

Amazing concept Cheoljoo, will love to see where you go with it, looking forward to seeing more inspiring work, Cheers!

Rupy
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[Coldrum]

Nice Mech :) .. cheers for stopping by.. good luck!

[Silverbeam]

Hmmmm good concept. Might be clearer on the story if David is using his "sling" or whatever your gonna do for it. :D Also it looks more sci-fi mech than steam punk.

[AUMAKUA]

I love the style , very steampunk and dramatic :) keep it coming!

[balasa]

that's an awesome composition. i like how the big guy at the back is shaping up

[paratrooper]

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Just completed the giant, and will be doing the next one,David.
Cheers.

[TedTerranova]

Really cool idea. The contrast of scale between the characters is great.

[JackZhang]

i love this giant bad ass! So big!

[rajbir]

Hi nice design and as some one said tru the contrast between the mech and the character is really good. i am not sure if this is yoour final version or its just a rough layout of your design, but some things bother me a lil
the gears under the pilot compartment , i do not understand how they will work and what are there functions

for the feet i would tather go for some gigantic feet , when i try to look at the silhouette of your mech i see nice shapes over all but feets take him down.

i would do some changes with the tank on his head. looks weird.

regards

raj

[filda]

concept looks awesome, I hope you ll get that atmosphere and lighting into the final image! Its one of my favourite :)

[RogerNobs]

Lovely bit of modelling.

Good luck with this.

[bgda]

very nice concept, and lovely contrast between the character and the mech.

keep it up (:

[stylize]

love the size difference between mech n the host! great modeling. good luck bro:applause:

[Ferx]

Hey Cheoljoo,

Really great concept, like a lot your previz sketch :D totally cool!! The model is looking awesome!! Cant wait to see more updates on your idea. Cheers!! :beer:

[paratrooper]

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Changed the layout a bit. I think it's better than the old layout, but not sure about your opinions.
Anyway,Thanks for the feedback.
Your comments are really helpful to the art direction. cheers!

[arLutiK]

I like the layout, love where you are going with the light to. When I do an image layout I use a phi spiral to help with placement :)

[Ataulfo]

It lookks great:thumbsup:

I like a lot the concept and the 3D is very good.
keep it up and good luck

[stylize]

I love this composition with that biker:) I was thinking that huge guy could stretch his big arms over to grab the biker to create an intense feel? its just my 2 cents worth of idea:P Overall it looks really good:) I'm keeping this thread as my subscription. cheers!! :buttrock:

[adriendebos]

Holy Mo-LEE! That's looking awesome :) I'm so impressed by how fast you modeled your concept!
I have no crits, I just can't wait to see more!

[showkunz]

Woow!Terrific work.I think this work have sample action but it's very good.I hope you'll win.I cheer.

[Donglu-LittleFish]

Love the design and composition! Looking forward to your updates!

[JackZhang]

I'd like to see when the ambient light kicks in, must be very nice.

keep it up Lee!

[miketche]

You're image is looking fantastic, but I think I like how the bike's front wheel is turned away from the giant in the original concept. As if he just speed up to meet him then quickly turned away to avoid running into him.

[Nigel-Q]

Looking awesome, man! I'm excited to see where this goes.. you've got some really great stuff.

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