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Peyotero

11-25-2008, 11:09 PM

http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g03/270903/270903_1227658168_medium.jpg

Title: Violeta
Name: Alejandro Gutiérrez Franco
Country: Mexico
Software: Photoshop

Character study.
Image done from scanned pencil drawing. Background is a scanned paper texture pasted as layer.
The Street Sign she is holding says something like 'Big Punches Alley'. Not a friendly girl she is.
Comments and critique welcome as always!

phoenix

11-26-2008, 11:32 AM

Good work, decent lighting

regards

Rizo

11-26-2008, 09:47 PM

overall nice work, try to double check the top of the head, since right now it looks like a little too flat, and too tall, almost a "frankestein" shape at the top of the head, right now the distance between the eyes and the top of the head looks way longer than the distance between the eyes and the lower part of the chin, when they should be the same, over all nice image.

Peyotero

11-28-2008, 06:19 PM

Thank you for your input, Rizo.
I can notice that the overall head size is slightly big; so by trimming the forehead / hair a bit, I may solve that issue too.
I'll post the correction in a couple of days.

Alex

Peyotero

01-28-2009, 06:45 PM

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/5121/darkiesviolet2gh8.jpg

A little late -system update issues- but here is the corrected image, with the girl's head shortened by some kind of oscure cosmetic surgery process.
I think she looks better -Her mood hasn't improved tough-.

Alex

FRENZIEDmind

02-17-2009, 05:19 PM

Nice work man.

crit:
It looks like her forehead is still slightly too big (on the second image). Good improvement though.

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