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Wiz
06-17-2003, 01:14 PM
so ,i modeled a - su27 .
i am all out of time ,so this is the final image.
gonna add the ammo ,but not to this pic ,to 'grey' renders
of the model ( which was the main thing..) thanks for any crits.

http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16738892.jpg
thgilacoc
06-17-2003, 05:11 PM
i'm the first to reply...

So here we go:

I think u need to choose the style of your image, i mean it's half realistic (model) , half toon (render)...

maybe you can also add more details in modeling...
ofir3dvb
06-17-2003, 05:24 PM
i think the model is great man......
bye.
Wiz
06-17-2003, 06:07 PM
hey thanks both :) ofir :)

thgilacoc ,but the background is a photo? maybe i over - did the blur?
Wiz
06-17-2003, 06:09 PM
oh you mean the render looks toon..
well i am weak in texturing and rendering :(
i try ,but i need to be better.
b1m2x3
06-17-2003, 06:38 PM
the plane sticks out way too much from the background.
Maybe you need to add some dirty-ness to the plane texture. :)
Wiz
06-17-2003, 07:31 PM
here are some more views.

http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16759073.jpg

http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16759097.jpg

http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16759122.jpg
Rei Ayanami
06-17-2003, 07:48 PM
I like the model, its a good representation of the Flanker. But the main render is just there, its not going anywhere in terms of style.
SPIDER2544
06-17-2003, 09:10 PM
i personaly think that this is a good start for your model

but your a long way from finished

you need to texture this and add some PFX smoke and jet blasts

to really make this rock
Arab Queen
06-17-2003, 09:45 PM
WOoOoOoOoW!
that's Cool:eek:
gooooooooooooooooooood job:applause:
Wiz
06-17-2003, 10:28 PM
thx guys!
i've decided to really restart the textruing and rendering
and go all a head ,and really take it slowly and carefully this time!
powerwave3d
06-18-2003, 04:12 AM
Are the missiles scaled correctly? They look a little small to me... Other than that, looking forward to seeing it textured fully:)
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