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GlynDavidson

11-23-2008, 11:58 AM

http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g61/114461/114461_1227445127_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g61/114461/114461_1227445127_large.jpg)

Title: R2D2
Name: Glyn Davidson
Country: United Kingdom
Software: CINEMA 4D

Hi all, this is my first post on the forum.

I've been using Cinema 4D for about a year now and was hoping you guys could provide some constructive criticism.

GarenMuln

11-23-2008, 09:36 PM

That's pretty good!

R2's dome is too dark, and his little red light looks more like it's been painted red rather than glowing. There is also some significant noise in the shadows.

Good Job!!! :)

Bonds0097

11-24-2008, 03:24 AM

The thing that first struck me is that you have dirt/rust on the body but none on the dome or legs.

The lego TIE is pretty small but looks pretty cool from here.

Matasorapit

11-24-2008, 04:31 AM

Beautiful, I love the work. Great job mate.

makman123

11-24-2008, 08:40 AM

cool robot .... like the model and the texture but I think it is too smooth .....
but it is good

keep going

GlynDavidson

11-24-2008, 10:48 AM

Wow, thanks for all the comments guys.

I've taken on board your comments GarenMuln and made his dome lighter, fixed his little red light and reduced the noise in the shadows.

I did play with rust on the legs etc but it looked too much. Will have another go tonight. Thanks Bonds0097.

makman123, I agree.

Here's the updated image:

http://www.glyndavidson.co.uk/images/fullsize/3D/3D R2D2 with Lego Toy.png

Wiz-Wiz-Wiz

11-24-2008, 11:51 AM

Artoo, cant help but love seein this little fella, not a bad job mate, reminds me more of the Clone wars R2.

I would remove the darkness from the two side panels, and lessen the rust intensity on the body.

Good luck!

:)

Wiz.

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