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Toeng.com
04-30-2002, 07:36 AM
This is the first artwork I post in CG Talk :)

the idea is from Pixar short film: For The Birds and the character was modelled in Cinema 4D before being brought to Max for final touch and render.

Also check out: This Other Version (http://www.toeng.com/archives/get.php?id=1020143186) of the same bird :)

Array
04-30-2002, 07:40 AM
specular highlights on the birds is too high, they look like they're made out of plastic.

Toeng.com
04-30-2002, 07:44 AM
Hehehe ... my bad, I edited the pic in Photoshop and enhance the color, maybe that is why the specular level getting too high :wavey:

Toeng.com
04-30-2002, 11:20 AM
I toned the specular level down (using Photoshop) and I also uploaded another version of the same bird here (http://www.toeng.com/archives/get.php?id=1020143186) :)

Please let me know what u think of it. Thank you.

lyndsay
04-30-2002, 01:22 PM
The second, without the highlights looks much better :thumbsup:

Nice composition :)

Toeng.com
04-30-2002, 09:44 PM
Thank you Lyndsay :)
I am working on a new model now ... I will post it when I'm done.

wurp
05-01-2002, 04:28 AM
nice, although the specs are a bit high on the birds. Since the birds are 3d shouldnt the text be 3d to? Also, I think you should change the text, to something like XSI rocks :p

Damien B
05-01-2002, 07:04 AM
to get rid of that spec problem use Oren Nayar Blin
and advanced transparence if needed. I liked that short film.
I would like to see any animatios cool.
:bounce: :bounce:

Toeng.com
05-01-2002, 10:36 AM
I really am a noobie guys ... I will try to animate the bird but honestly, I don't know how just yet :)

this is the screenshot (http://www.cis.ohio-state.edu/~wijoyo/temp/screenshot.jpg) of the bird being rendered in MAX if you guys are curious.

Any good tuts on animating the bird???

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