My first artwork post

[Array]

specular highlights on the birds is too high, they look like they're made out of plastic.

[Toeng.com]

Hehehe ... my bad, I edited the pic in Photoshop and enhance the color, maybe that is why the specular level getting too high :wavey:

[Toeng.com]

I toned the specular level down (using Photoshop) and I also uploaded another version of the same bird here (http://www.toeng.com/archives/get.php?id=1020143186) :)

Please let me know what u think of it. Thank you.

[lyndsay]

The second, without the highlights looks much better :thumbsup:

Nice composition :)

[Toeng.com]

Thank you Lyndsay :)
I am working on a new model now ... I will post it when I'm done.

[wurp]

nice, although the specs are a bit high on the birds. Since the birds are 3d shouldnt the text be 3d to? Also, I think you should change the text, to something like XSI rocks :p

[Damien B]

to get rid of that spec problem use Oren Nayar Blin
and advanced transparence if needed. I liked that short film.
I would like to see any animatios cool.
:bounce: :bounce:

[Toeng.com]

I really am a noobie guys ... I will try to animate the bird but honestly, I don't know how just yet :)

this is the screenshot (http://www.cis.ohio-state.edu/~wijoyo/temp/screenshot.jpg) of the bird being rendered in MAX if you guys are curious.

Any good tuts on animating the bird???

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