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grstovell
06-16-2003, 03:35 PM
Thought I'd post this one here just to get some feedback.
I decided to get in way over my head and learn C4D while entering this month's Classic challenge.
So here it is... a Nomad Rat warrior!
comments?
Spearhead
06-16-2003, 04:06 PM
i dig the shoe! good work!

Did you follow a tutorial or did you make it? If tut could you post a link, if yourself could you post a rendered and wireframed shot from different angles? :p
grstovell
06-16-2003, 04:39 PM
Sure. Here are some wires. No tutorial here, just a lot of trial and error... The sole is actually composed of about 6 or 7 layers, and then all boot parts are modeled individually. (this one is a bit too 'thin'... I had to scale it to fit the rest of the body... bummer!)

-g

http://www.firstprescaldwell.org/greg/boots.jpg
dandavis
06-16-2003, 04:40 PM
Nice modeling. Love the details!
Spearhead
06-16-2003, 06:37 PM
Tx alot, and well done on making that doc marten :thumbsup:
Love the detailwork =P
JIII
06-17-2003, 04:27 AM
love the shoe, is it all one object or no?
modestmouse
06-17-2003, 04:42 AM
seems like the legs are a little to small
AdamT
06-17-2003, 04:55 AM
The boot is awesome. The rest of the figure is nice too, although I think it's a little top-heavy.
grstovell
06-18-2003, 05:31 AM
HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I need a fresh pair of eyes here... I just started blocking the head (for the third time) and I'm still not so sure I like it (I just can't tell why)..

I just modeled the basic head shape and plopped it over the neck... no ears yet (just eary-stubs).

CRITS of any kind are very, very, very much appreciated!
Demonslayer
06-18-2003, 05:52 AM
The head seems to be big and just doesn't seem to match, it goes from a light color to dark and you can't really see where it changed or anything.
AdamT
06-18-2003, 06:03 AM
I think it needs to be more of a blend between a human and rat head since the body is pretty much all human.
modestmouse
06-18-2003, 06:45 AM
thats exactly what i was ganna say Adam
grstovell
06-21-2003, 04:46 AM
after a CHUNK of rats, semi-rats, semi-human, etc, etc, etc heads... I decided to give up to trying to fit a rat's head to a human body--- at least for now I don't think it's going to work.

SO... here he is with the beginning of a human face (no longer in the challenge)


-g
geoffb
06-21-2003, 07:49 AM
Seems like the torso may be too thin after it comes out of the breastplate. IMO.

Geoff:buttrock:
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