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chaplin
11-19-2008, 08:01 AM
Something is missing, I can't tell what.

Any crits or comments?

The inspiration is this one time when I was in the woods and I felt someone or something was watching me.

Its supposed to be a hawk. I have used multiple photos for reference. Photoshop 8

Btw, why is the file upload size so small?

CybrGfx
11-19-2008, 12:47 PM
It looks more like an owl than a hawk. The head is too high and misshapen. You should have used a grid to ensure proper proportions.
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/9687/hawkll3.gif
I don't know how many "multiple sources" you used, but if this image by Tim Knight was your main source, it is considered "good form" to acknowledge it...Regardless, your anatomy needs work.

The upload file is only as big as YOU have it set to...

~C

chaplin
11-19-2008, 03:50 PM
You are right for the anatomy input -- it never occurred to me to super impose the images since I make prints of all the pics I will use. Thanks.

I will make sure to include knight's name appears in the references list

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