my first painting ever

[nikitarose]

Hey there PanicAttack,
Your image doesn't show because you must post at least 2 comments first before you can post an image so get your first couple of posts out of the way and then try again to post your image. Good luck

[stoefln]

hi there!
i think its great for your first image with the tablet!
the perspective is good and i like the atmospheric smoke. however i think there could be made some improvements on the lightning:
your sun is yellow which is kind of odd cause the atmosphere should filter the sun's light in a more orange or red direction IMO- your buildings have this color too- maybe you thought of it already...
i dont know what your intention with the meteor was, for me its unclear if this is just a part of the whole meteor which crashed in the back (crater) or if actually this part IS the meteor...

[PanicAttack]

Hey there PanicAttack,
Your image doesn't show because you must post at least 2 comments first before you can post an image so get your first couple of posts out of the way and then try again to post your image. Good luck

Oh, thanks alot!

Hope it will be okey now, dont know if I need to edit image after this second post.
If you still cant see it, pls reply or send me pm.

:)

[PanicAttack]

hi there!
i think its great for your first image with the tablet!
the perspective is good and i like the atmospheric smoke. however i think there could be made some improvements on the lightning:
your sun is yellow which is kind of odd cause the atmosphere should filter the sun's light in a more orange or red direction IMO- your buildings have this color too- maybe you thought of it already...
i dont know what your intention with the meteor was, for me its unclear if this is just a part of the whole meteor which crashed in the back (crater) or if actually this part IS the meteor...

thanks for comment and crits. I am new in digital paintings so appreciate it alot. it is sunset, so orange or red is alot better then yellow, i'll change it.

place where meteor hit is below the image of sun, but the parts are on the city (fire and smoking) and one of it is by the road.

this is copy paste from another forum that I wrote: Things I still dont like is color of big highway, "position" of other highway when it became curve while coming near the city. Impact hole of meteor, some friends said it doesnt looks like huge hole, I agree. Far part of the city is somehow geting lost in perspective, smoke on the nearest part of comet and so on...

[nikitarose]

image is all good now, shows up fine.
good work by the way.
Have fun

[TrenchcoatPixie]

What's that...big grey lump? Is that supposed to be the meteor? 'Cause if so, there's some issues. First of all, meteors don't roll after they strike the earth: you've got your impact point, and right in the center, you've got your meteor. Second, a meteor that big would cause a much, much bigger crater--as in, this whole scene would just be crater, from this position all we'd be able to see was heat glare and vaporized rock, it wouldn't be a picture "of" anything. I'd take out the meteor and the carved out trail altogether and put something else in the foreground to anchor our eyes. Maybe another impact point, with a much smaller rock?

If it's NOT the meteor, I am back to asking what the big grey lump is. >.>

[PanicAttack]

What's that...big grey lump? Is that supposed to be the meteor? 'Cause if so, there's some issues. First of all, meteors don't roll after they strike the earth: you've got your impact point, and right in the center, you've got your meteor. Second, a meteor that big would cause a much, much bigger crater--as in, this whole scene would just be crater, from this position all we'd be able to see was heat glare and vaporized rock, it wouldn't be a picture "of" anything. I'd take out the meteor and the carved out trail altogether and put something else in the foreground to anchor our eyes. Maybe another impact point, with a much smaller rock?

If it's NOT the meteor, I am back to asking what the big grey lump is. >.>

Yay! Great. Nice critics.

Ok, that grey (metal like) big piece is one part of the meteor. It broke apart from the "main" meteor when it hit (up-right corner on pic) creating another, smaller impact point. Still havent draw "main" (dont know how to say it in english) meteor. But you are right, it definitly cannot just roll on the ground like that. Even if the strike point isnt 90 percent degree angle.

Thanks mate for constructive crits, I will work on that pic more today.

cheers.

[PanicAttack]

I worked more on this one.

Comments and critics are welcome.

edit: it isnt finished yet, ofcourse.
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/2033/vulkancopygi5.jpg

[ariian]

hey I think you're doing great.Esspecially I like the perspective much more and adds more impact on the pic. Keep working on it.I'm pretty shure it will be great :)

[PanicAttack]

hey I think you're doing great.Esspecially I like the perspective much more and adds more impact on the pic. Keep working on it.I'm pretty shure it will be great :)

many thanks.

I am working on it, and doint some studies (figure, portrets)...

Hope it isn't just because of my name ;):D:beer:

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