WIP: Space Marine

[Dave Black]

Looks pretty good so far. Having not personally seen the particular material you are basing this on, I cannot crit on the overall design. If fact, it's impossible to remark on the modeling, as it's completly fantasy and can be anything you want.

Having said that, here are a few pointers.

One, good lighting will make a huge difference in the overall quality of the image. I'm not talk GI, just a decent 3 point light setup would be a good start.

Second, I'd say alot of the details need to be a bit harder. Some of the indentations around the shoulder panel have a certain squishyness that could be shored up.

It's a good start. If you want better crits, try posting the reference you are working from.

Keep going. It's a very nice thing you are doing for your bro.

I like it.

-3DZ

:D

[ZVAN]

The smaller pipes behind the head looks weird as in the proportion with the bigger pipes.. maybe u could change the style of the pipes..

[Ojah]

thx for the critics, ill work on it as soon as ive got the time :)

heres the reference btw (its not meant to become a copy, just something like it)

http://members1.chello.nl/~rhoetjes/demonh.jpg

[ShortFuseNZ]

Man thats a cool pic your working with.

Good start and Good luck

[Ojah]

heres an update of my character.
updates: sharper lines, better lighting, added breast armour, and a start of the belt thing he/she`s wearing.
as before, of course im lookin forward to gettin critics :)

[Ojah]

hmm, forgot to add the picture, and dont seem to be able to edit my post , oh well, then ill put it here :)
http://members1.chello.nl/~rhoetjes/36.jpg

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