my first modeling

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ok, its an ok start, here is my crit so far

1/ if i were u , i would smooth out the side of the face from where the eyes end, as it looks somewhat odd.

2/ define the eye area a bit more, make it more prominant and add more detail

3/ try to put less definition on the mouth, at the moment it looks like it really pushes out.

4/ just my opinion, but the crease which follows up from the nose i would spread out to follow the eyebrows, but smooth them out quickly


well thats my crit, i know some is creative crit, but i think it will help somewhat... will be interesting to see updates.

keep it goin!

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