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visionmaster2
11-12-2008, 08:40 PM
marc mordelet is entered in the "Steampunk Myths and Legends" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/steampunk/view_entries.php?challenger=15972)

Latest Update: Finished Video: final

Update link on vimeo : http://vimeo.com/8398911
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1233694188_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=5658924#post5658924)

visionmaster2
11-22-2008, 02:21 AM
hi,
i will work on Ulysse.
i am working on it after my job, and i will update this thread in the week end.
the models are made quickly with basic shapes, with not a lot details or textures,
only Ulysse has a displacament map.
i am not sure i will make a storyboard, because i want to be free on this project, to do and change my mind every time i want.
the head design is based on this picture of Ulysse : http://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:NAMA_Ulysse_%26_sir%C3%A8ne_1.jpg
and the body from Cobra : http://images.google.fr/images?q=cobra+space+adventure&ie=UTF-8&oe=utf-8&rls=org.mozilla:fr:official&client=firefox-a&um=1&sa=X&oi=image_result_group&resnum=4&ct=title
the mood will be a mix of this 2 heros :
space adventure Ulysse


http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/ulysse.jpg

visionmaster2
11-22-2008, 06:03 AM
1rst animations to test the look. no dispacement for Ulysse except for the last one.
mpeg2 10 megas

visionmaster2
11-22-2008, 08:09 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1227384592_medium.jpg (http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/ulysses2.mpg)
animation ulysse mpeg2 10 megas 20 secondes( save target as)

visionmaster2
11-23-2008, 02:28 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1227407294_medium.jpg (http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/ulysses3.mpg)

animatic for poseidon. 5 megas mpeg2
save target as, or it will perhaps not play.

ReveFilm
11-23-2008, 09:31 AM
I really like the animation you posted. The character's eyes are great.

visionmaster2
11-26-2008, 09:17 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1227734242_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1227734242_large.jpg)


Thank you !!

animatic 03 save target as
http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic3.mpg

Kris-Rusinek
11-26-2008, 11:16 PM
Looks like you are trying to show too many things in one time... I couldn't quite catch the story while watching your animatic... anyway - nice job. Maybe the shot with raised weapon and hitting the robot needs some more rethinking and refinement... good luck!

visionmaster2
11-26-2008, 11:47 PM
Thank you kris !
in fact for the story, there is no one in this animatic. that just quick test to see the characters/world in action. nothing else.
i am about to finish the story for the trailer, and i will begining the process to make the reel shots after.

andreasng
11-27-2008, 08:39 PM
I like it. I think the camera moves way too much in some of the scenes. It's very 90'ies "yay we got 3d, lets move the camera!" hehehe. The designs looks cool, especially the giant in scene 2 or 3 which goes face to face with the ulysse(?) and jabs his jaws.

keep it up, and you'll be done in 4 days. :scream:

nice man

LoboRecio
11-29-2008, 02:12 AM
it looks very good, congratulations!!!

visionmaster2
12-04-2008, 10:25 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1228429514_medium.jpg (http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/runcycle.mpg)

Thank you All !!!

1rst test of the horse run cycle. not correct for the moment ! :)
save target as on the pict for the mpeg2 (2 megas)

visionmaster2
12-05-2008, 05:19 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1228497555_medium.jpg (http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/runcycle2.mpg)

new test for the horse.
right click on the image, save target as . mpg2, run time : 13s
or right clic here : http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/runcycle2.mpg

Pyke
12-05-2008, 06:16 PM
Hey man. Love the style and the lighting you have going on! Are you going to do the entire short in black and white? Its almost got a marionette, shadow puppet feel. Very VERY cool. :D

Im no animator (far from it!), but Im sure some people a little more qualified will be able to make some more technical suggestions to the run cycle. From my end, I just feel like it could use more weight. Its a mechanical device, and is moving to smoothly for the silhouette its depicting. It feels like it should be a little...slower....more bulky. Weather that means bending the legs more as he lands, and putting more pressure on those leg springs, I dunno. Like I said, i'm no animator, so take what I say with a pinch of salt!

EDIT-Just took a look at your portfolio...man! You are a legend! Your FREAKS image WIPS have been my background for about 4 months now! I change them occasionally, but always come back!

visionmaster2
12-06-2008, 09:28 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1228598918_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1228598918_large.jpg)

runcycle 3
save target as : http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/runcycle3.mpg

Hi Pyke, thank you for your comments, not sure it will be full black and white. i am working on that... i will decide it at the last minute :)
i think you have right about the horse, but there was a point you couldnt know :
the horse dont run on the ground ;) but yes, its not very good animated, i am newby in animation, and i will update this shot.
i am glad you love my freaks ! i am following your great steampunk thread in secret, and will comment it soon .

visionmaster2
12-08-2008, 08:25 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1228767941_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1228767941_large.jpg)

1rst test for a sword with fire ( low res ) the shot is at the end of the animation tests. save target as : www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic4.mpg (http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic4.mpg)

visionmaster2
12-12-2008, 02:47 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1229050034_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1229050034_large.jpg)

animation test. Save target as
www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic5.mpg (http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic5.mpg)




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visionmaster2
12-12-2008, 11:19 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1229123956_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1229123956_large.jpg)

another test shot at the end.
save target as :
www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic6.mpg (http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic6.mpg)



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Bethoven
12-13-2008, 08:16 AM
Very good! The head look like real!

adib
12-13-2008, 09:03 AM
Very nice strange fealing! Good style and atmosphere! My advise keep it black and white.:beer:

visionmaster2
12-19-2008, 03:19 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1229656787_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1229656787_large.jpg)

save target as :
http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic7.mpg

thank you all ! yes it will be black and white, but with some colors too ;)

Airflow
12-20-2008, 05:04 AM
It all looks very epic. I really like the final shot.

visionmaster2
12-20-2008, 10:41 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1229812881_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1229812881_large.jpg)
Thank you ! your team work is great too ! :thumbsup:

save target as : http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic8.mpg



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visionmaster2
12-22-2008, 01:49 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1229910552_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1229910552_large.jpg)

test of the steambike at the end.
save target as : http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic9.mpg




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mim-Armand
12-22-2008, 03:30 PM
somehow I love the style of your work man, unique with alot personality on it;
keep it up ma, it is going to be a great work, ;)

GL btw, :thumbsup:

visionmaster2
12-30-2008, 04:33 AM
thank you mim Armand ! i like your work to !http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1230611619_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1230611619_large.jpg)




new animation : save target as : www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic10.mpg (http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic10.mpg)



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AdamTSC
01-01-2009, 09:48 PM
Love your style! Very dark, and every shot has something interesting that hooks the viewer's interest. Will definitely watch this develop.

visionmaster2
01-05-2009, 04:33 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1231130009_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1231130009_large.jpg)


Thank you Adamtsc !

more tests.
save target as :
http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic11.mpg (http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic11.mpg)



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visionmaster2
01-08-2009, 09:52 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1231451539_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1231451539_large.jpg)
new test for posseidon

save target as :
http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic12.mpg









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visionmaster2
01-12-2009, 01:08 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1231765711_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1231765711_large.jpg)

some new renders

save target as :
http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic15.mpg


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AdamTSC
01-13-2009, 02:43 AM
It's starting to look more unified and cohesive. I love the way you play with light and dark in this piece. Too bad you got rid of the song :) I found it a bit strange at first, but was surprisingly catchy.

visionmaster2
01-13-2009, 02:48 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1231858130_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1231858130_large.jpg)
thank you Adam !
For the song, no worry, i am working with the same band for the trailer.
myspace (http://www.myspace.com/xmakeena)


1rst test of a flying machine.
save target as :
http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic16.mpg




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visionmaster2
01-13-2009, 10:11 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1231884668_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1231884668_large.jpg)

http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/wire2.jpg
some wire

Martijn81
01-14-2009, 06:57 AM
This looks great, I love your style! Goodluck finishing it all up!

DarkoV
01-14-2009, 03:52 PM
Atmosphere in your animatics is great - nicely disturbing

visionmaster2
01-16-2009, 12:59 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1232067584_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1232067584_medium.jpg)
Thank you Martijn81 and Darkov !

some more 3 shots ( still a lot of work on them )

save target as :
http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic17.mpg



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Duncs
01-16-2009, 01:22 AM
Great update Marc - the mood of the first two shots is fantastic, really dark and surreal. What kind of audio are you going to put with it?

cmdrpi
01-16-2009, 07:12 AM
This looks amazing! Very nicely animated. :applause:

indra0sen
01-21-2009, 09:05 PM
hey concept is good
but u can do much better...
keep goin on.
best luck.

visionmaster2
01-26-2009, 06:50 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1232952637_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1232952637_medium.jpg)

Thank you all !
Duncs, the audio will be a mix of tribal music with a little bit of jungle.




i am working on the sound fx for the moment. almost all the shot are render.
i need to finish 10 more shots.
the music will be add at the end with the voices.

here is a little 1mn preview of the first sound fx.( some shots needs to be composited ).
the trailer will be under 3mn.

save target as :
http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animatic215.mpg





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adib
01-26-2009, 06:57 AM
Nice update,very unic entry! Best to you!

Duncs
01-26-2009, 03:08 PM
amazing stuff. The energy in the first few shots in awesome. keep it up!

visionmaster2
02-03-2009, 01:27 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1233667647_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1233667647_medium.jpg)

Teaser !

save target as :

http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/teaser_marc_mordelet.mpg

adib
02-03-2009, 01:38 PM
Like I said before,very nice style.Good luck!

visionmaster2
02-03-2009, 06:57 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1233687445_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1233687445_medium.jpg)

final
teaser + making of + full trailer

save target as ( 140megs...) 6mn

http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animaticflash/720540.mpg

i am waiting for the flash convertion, and will upload it asap.


thank you adib, i am glad you like it. you made a wonderfull job !

visionmaster2
02-03-2009, 08:49 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1233694188_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/23/15972/15972_1233694188_medium.jpg)

Software: 3ds max

this is my final work. hope you will enjoy it !
teaser + making off + full trailer.
i will speak about it tomorow...after a good and long night :) zzzzz

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/steampunk/player.php?entry_id=100705)

AdamTSC
02-03-2009, 11:26 PM
Incredible!! Was hooked the whole 4 minutes. Too bad it isn't really feature length :P

cmdrpi
02-04-2009, 08:14 AM
Man, your short totally amazed me!
Not only because i am crazy about any kind of noir stuff,
but because it has such an intense mood and brilliant camera!

Congratulations! :)

ivanisavich
02-04-2009, 10:11 AM
Great work! I agree that the film noir style to it really gives it a great feeling. And the eyes on your character looked totally real...excellent lighting/shading there!

DestinyB
02-04-2009, 08:01 PM
one man.
one machine.
50 tons of work.
Ulysses's texture was incredible, way to capture a mood to the fullest with such wonderful detail.
phenomenal job :)

visionmaster2
02-05-2009, 01:53 AM
Thank you all for your cool words, i am glad you like it.

This video was made during my spare time, at home, with one pc (core2 2.4ghz).

i dont made any storyboard, i wanted to be free to change everything at any time.

The process was really simple : keep the modeling and rendering process as simple as possible ... because of the little computer configuration.
So i used basic shapes : spheres, cubes, lines etc...( except for the ulysses head and the "robot" girl).
Posseidon is a combinaison of a simple biped character studio, with fonts i bended on it.
i use his eyes for all the characters and animals in the video.

About 3 pass by shot. 1 color/shadow, 1 z depth, one fog/light and sometimes one for the smoke.
Under 30 secondes of rendering for all the passes together, except for those whith smoke.
when a shot was to long to render, i optimized it : lower the reflections, lower the amount of shadow map and the antialiasing ( big mistake for this one...)
no displacement map, very limited bump, 3 lights maximum ( only one for the shadows ), no final gather.
The environements was made after the animation, to limit the amount of work/render on them.
Because i dont made any story board, there is a lot of rush i dont have used for the final video. But it was the price i paid to be as free as possible, in this conditions of work.

i made the sound myself, with sounds and loop i found on freesound.org
A friend (http://www.myspace.com/xmakeena) (niCo Kraken , dit le mouteuX) help me at the end to clean the volume of the soundtrack ( my speakers looks like a yogurt pot ) and he add some nice subb "under it ".

Because of my bad english (as you can see here), i used the demo of a speach synthesizer for the voice.

i enjoyed to work on this video, i learned a lot of things. i hope i will have the chance to work soon on other videos.

thank you !
same video as the final entry, in pal format, mpg2.
right click, save target as :
http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animaticflash/720540.mpg

ru-bonsai
02-05-2009, 04:16 PM
crazy.
and very clever.

I really like this dreamy feeling you gave it,
and you kept a very productive workflow, congratulations!

watching this video fussli, dalý and bunuel came to my mind, wonderful atmosphere.

keep up and good luck!

Duncs
02-05-2009, 06:22 PM
Great work Marc and well done for finishing...

I think the restrictions you imposed on yourself actually helped give this piece its unique feel and atmosphere. Very inventive use of your resources and a fantastically moody result.

All the best

Duncs

Martijn81
02-06-2009, 10:42 PM
Your style and mood are GREAT! great story which captured me for the whole movie! Congratulations on finishing and goodluck with the judging!

dietpillpyramidscheme
02-14-2009, 02:40 AM
Brilliant.

Keep up the great work, you should be really proud.

How do you intend to release the finished version? Or is the trailer all there is?

cmdrpi
02-26-2009, 03:40 PM
Congratulations! I really prayed you would win because i was so in love with your
noir style, et voila!
Well deserved! :applause:

Spin99
02-27-2009, 11:54 AM
CONGRATS MARC!

This is by far my favourite entry, was expecting something amazin from Monsieur Mordelet
any case. The realism on the humans is mind boggling to me.
Love the style, rhythm, animation, lighting editing and all the production stuff.

Amazing what speech synthesisers sound like these days.
Really outstanding imho (in my humble opinion) In 2 months?
I don't know, to me this IS the Master Award. But hey, judges differ huh?

Still enjoying the movie. Going to be a while!

Fabuleux!

PS-- And it's a four page thread. I'm shocked. Comes to prove popularity really
doesn't seem to matter that much here. I find that quite encouraging.

AdamTSC
02-27-2009, 03:20 PM
Congrats!!! :beer:

spunji
02-28-2009, 11:54 AM
Very very good. #1 for me. Well done!

arcaneg
03-01-2009, 03:50 PM
awesome work man! congratz to you final crazy result! :)

silverian
03-08-2009, 06:55 PM
hi..marc great to see ur winning video...great job ..congrats.. :applause:


keep it up good luck..

RP

zimfin
03-18-2009, 03:32 PM
I would love to see the video but for some reason it never loads any further than the very beginning, (where that clicking sound starts) and I was wondering if there is something I am doing wrong?

visionmaster2
03-19-2009, 09:27 AM
Thank you All !! :beer::beer::beer:

zimfin, thank you :), here is the mpg2 version :

same video as the final entry, in pal format, mpg2.
right click, save target as :
http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animaticflash/720540.mpg __________________

zimfin
03-20-2009, 06:34 AM
Thank you All !! :beer::beer::beer:

zimfin, thank you :), here is the mpg2 version :

same video as the final entry, in pal format, mpg2.
right click, save target as :
http://www.hollywoodpocket.com/animaticflash/720540.mpg __________________Thanks mate, I appreciate that! Downloading now... Wow, that is awesome! Congrats!!

shtl
08-08-2009, 06:36 PM
Hey Marc! Coming long time after the show, but I just wanted to congratulate you on this entry! Very steam punk moment.

Btw, I couldn't DL your last link :-( But saw the one from the challenge :-)

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