Steampunk Myths and Legends Entry: Yusuf Eltelpany

[thebest]

Subscribing...... waiting to see some updates amigo :wip:

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my sketch for that one, a romantic mode tells a story about giving anything for the sake of your lover ... even it is your main gear heart that makes you move ... it's that crazy feeling of love ..

I guess I will develop those characters a bit, but anyway this is the main idea ..

[maxspider3000]

Tony basha ... here we back again like old times my friend :D

[scorpion66]

excellent start :applause: :applause:

[Abu-moaaz]

Good luck man :applause:

I very happy

[mccg]

Lovely idea :)

[rabieart]

Good luck bro
am so happy to c u here
u may search on a vfs animation reel(youtube.com) got almost the same meaning of Ur concept
if I got it I will post the link for u...It may help u
good luck again
love always
Mohammed Ali

[maxspider3000]

thanks everyone for your nice support ...
Muhammed, thanks a lot ... I will wait for the video my dear :)

[diaaking]

wowwwwwwwwwwww :thumbsup:

[diaaking]

wow :eek:

Great idea :applause:

[Jassar]

Get it on bro :buttrock:

[maxspider3000]

hey .. diaa and jassar, thanks ...

I will do some sketches for the characters soon (isa) ... wish me a good luck guys :wavey:

[rabieart]

dude.............here it is :bounce:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f1lkEgKzix4&feature=related

[thebest]

hey Yusuf it`s time for updates mate :bounce: keep going my friend

[maxspider3000]

thanks muhammed for the movie, it's good that you shared it so I don't find myself doing the same work :)

tony ... it will be (dam lel rokab) :D

[varma]

Very nice Idea!
I will definitely be watching this to the end!
Good luck!
:)

[darek27]

fantastic idea. looking forward to seeing more. good luck

[Legacy40k]

It reminds me of Romeo and Juliette. Great idea though!

[maxspider3000]

varma ... thanks for your nice words, this will be a greet honor for me ^^

darek27 ... thanks man, I will do my best :)

Legacy40k ... yeah man, I decided to follow the story of "Romeo & Juliet" to add some legend theme to the story .... thanks :)

[maxspider3000]

http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1226943403_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1226943403_large.jpg)

the sketch of the steampunk knight, the princess sketch is the next -isa-

[thebest]

lol :twisted: that`s a very cool knight u got there mate keep going :wip:

[maxspider3000]

thanks my dear, am happy that you liked him :)

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http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1227133620_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1227133620_large.jpg)

this is the first modeling process for the knight head, which may be Romeo from william's "Romeo & Juliet" as a main story for the entry ... still developing on it and trying to make a strong line story ...

[jondiyolah]

nice start good luck brother

[GonzaloGolpe]

haha the idea is great, good luck with the challenge and have a funny time over here ;)

[thebest]

keep going mate :wip:

[maxspider3000]

jondiyolah ... thanks my dear, I will really need a hard LUCK on that one :D

Gonzalo ... thanks man, am glad that you liked it, good luck for you too :)

Tony ... I will dude ... I will -isa- :D

[MN3M]

Great...Keep movieng forward buddy..
i`ll post my comments when you finish the model

[maxspider3000]

misho basha ... thanks my dear, I will wait for your "precious" comments :p

[Shisha]

nice to see u here yousef,
great idea :applause:
waiting for next :thumbsup:

[niva]

Hey, I love your concept sketches. Your 3d is just getting started but I'm really looking forward to see how this evolves. Based on your initial sketch it def has a lot of potential.

[maxspider3000]

Shisha ... thanks bro, I will try to update it soon :)

niva ... glad that you liked it, I still doing it with the head, so ... there will be more -isa- :)

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http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1227475628_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1227475628_large.jpg)

I worked a bit with the eye, have to finish this more quickly as there still be the Juliet one ...

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more details on the head, some overall shaping for the body and a lot of cogs and gears modeled for the next stage ...

[thebest]

hey Yusuf ur updates are looking cool but I guess u need to move faster mate .....keep going :bounce:

[Jassar]

Great job bro, lovin the details so far :buttrock:

[moustafaer]

very nice concept and idea goodluck ya jo

Steampunk challenge (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?threadid=697726

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[Micro26]

Nice modeling u have man. I like the concept a lot.
I think thechallenging here is to nail down the expressions of the characters.
Waitin for updates:thumbsup:

[maxspider3000]

Tony ... thanks man, I know that am doing bad again, but I hope I will finish it early ... enough :D

Jassar ... thanks my dear, am proud of that :)

Mustafa ... thanks ya basha :D , good luck 4 u too

Fotis ... I appreciate your nice words dude, thanks ... you are right, bringing an overall steampunk to a love mode wouldn't be that easy :D

[Kerem]

Beautiful work! :thumbsup:

[sasquatch70]

Hello Yusuf,

Fantastic modeling. Best fo luck,
Brad

[Siahpoosh]

great concept
keep it up :bounce:

[maxspider3000]

Kerem ... thanks a lot ^^

sasquatch70 ... thanks, good luck for you too my friend :)

mamali132002 ... thanks so much man ^_^

[Shisha]

great work brother...:applause:
i realy like it.
please keep going & don't slacken i want to see it finished :)

[mrpeace]

Is not Romeo too smooth? I mean its your choice, I kind of love it to be edgy and metallic.

Your idea is gr8 and good luck to it.

[diaaking]

great working ... keep going :applause:

[anostudio]

That a great work and concept too .. good luck and keep it up:buttrock:

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http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1228512283_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1228512283_large.jpg)

I worked with his body, making some details ... I will try to finish him soon as I will have more time on "Eid ElAdha" ... it will turn to a"stembunk eid" for me :P

btw ... happy fest to all Muslims around the whole planet ... :)

[maxspider3000]

Sorry guys for the late reply ...

shisha ... ya man, I wish too that I could finish it .... looking to the free time I get, I have to work hard next few days ..

mrpeace ... can you explain what do you mean ? ... do you mean the shape of the geometry or somthing else ? ... thanks for your care anyway :)

Diaa ... thanks ya zamil ;P

Anwar ... thanks a lot my friend, keep going you too :)

[Jassar]

I said it once and I'll say it again... your modeling rocks!!

[JosephMclamb]

Hey looking good. I like the details on the model. Any ideas for the background?

[Samran]

Nice details I love to see one with AO render


Have fun ^_^

[maxspider3000]

Jassar ... I said it once and I'll say it again "enta 7abiby" :D ...

JosephMclamb ... thank sman, for the BG, I guess I will use a balcony scene from the story, when Romeo jumps on to Juliet balcony to tell her about his love .... but as I didn't reach to that part yet, it still opened for suggestions ... :)

Sam ... "nawartena" :D ... I will do a render foryou dude, just stand by ^^

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http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1228647761_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1228647761_large.jpg)

a render for what I did till now, as my dear Sam asks ^^

[Samran]

Yes man match batter viewer with AO ^_^ thanks and good luck friend

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http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1229111175_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1229111175_large.jpg)

I finished the arms, still the legs and then, BINGo, to the little Juliet :)

[thebest]

keep going yusuf u are doing a good job :beer:

[maxspider3000]

sam ... you are welcome, just make your wish ... as you are the one who have the "fanos" with your Alaadin dude :D

thanks a lot tony, you always push me up man :)

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Ok ... thats it guys, I finished that "Romeo", the modeling part at least ... now I will move for the "Juliet", If anyone have any comment, plz feel free to share :)

thanks for the support guys ^^

[thebest]

looking good yusuf ....can`t wait to see juliet..... keep going :arteest:

[maxspider3000]

thanks a lot ... neither can I :D

I worked a bit with the head last night, she will be more simple than romeo ... hope the updates will come so soon :)

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and here it comes, the lovely Juliet ... this is the head of her, I will make her more simple than Romeo ... you know, girls stuff :D

hope you like it guys :)

[polypic]

i liked what i saw
rom in too nice wating to see him finished with details
waiting to see the finished the beautiful juliet
i think u will rock soon ( hatkasar edenia )
keep going man
just excuse me cuz i`m away from the forum u know

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http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1230070440_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1230070440_large.jpg)

I guess with this one,I finished my character modeling part ... what comes next will be either the location\environment modeling or the texturing process ... didn't make my decision yet ...

anyway, comments are more than welcome ... relly more more... than welcome ^^

[authentic]

nice chara design. Just maybe too much space between mouth and head I think.

[maxspider3000]

Eslam basha ... thanks man for your encouragement, I was waiting for your feedback :)

authentic ... glad you liked it ... mmmmm, ya, maybe you are right about that space area, am still not sure ... I will wait till the end compositing to decide what to do ... but thanks for mention it any way :)

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Ok guys, I played a bit with the head trying to texture it, actually this is one of my early beginning on unwrap an object, so am glad that I did something on the right way ... or at least that's what I hope :D ...

comments will be so appreciated, don't watch and just leave, I need your 2 cents ^^

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I think i won't finish it on time, but anyway still trying ...

[red1osman]

still have some time..
do your best..

[polypic]

good hard great job
i have some note about girl
i like her metallic dress nice but
the hand can be much better i think if it`s smooth flowed with the Wrist
u know
just think about it
keep going man

[Jassar]

Great job! keep going!! it's becoming better and better :)

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http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1231698377_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1231698377_large.jpg)

the inner body details texturing process ... to be continued :)

[maxspider3000]

Ridhwan ... thanks, am fighting to find more free time to end it on the time ...

eslam ... motshaker ya rays :D ... I guess you have a really good point on your comment, but as for the dead line, I think it will be that way for now :) , even I don't like it too

Jassar ... thanks Haytham, I hope I can hold it getting better till the end :D

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http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1231803166_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1231803166_large.jpg)

the arm of romeo, texturing process

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http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1231804045_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1231804045_large.jpg)

all what had been done till now in the texturing

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finished the texturing of romeo, I did the environment too, but I will put it on the final compositing so it will have a better lighting ...

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http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1232139479_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15908/15908_1232139479_medium.jpg)

Juliet has been textured too ... next step will be putting them together to make Romeo confess his love to her ... I could cry from that scene :P

[MartinNielsen]

Excellent character designs :thumbsup: I hope you can finish the entry in time :)

[thebest]

keep going friend u are so close to the finish line :arteest:

[maxspider3000]

thanks a lot guys ... am now on the final rendering process ...

then come the compositing, then ...... bingo ... it's done -isa- :D

[maxspider3000]

I did every thing, but when it comes to render ... the max display an error related to bitmap files ...

I tried hard to solve the problem, but unfortunately I couldn't ...
even till now, can't get the final render ...

OK guys, thanks a lot for the support, see you on the next challenge -insa' Allah- :)

[MartinNielsen]

A pity :sad: It looks good, what you have. See you next time then :)

[maxspider3000]

thanks man ... :)

I see that you finished yours, good luck with your work ^^

[darkevil2]

Wow , i hope i`m not too late

Great work man I see

and the idea is crazy but cool

ya gamed enta ;)

awsome man ,, Much respect :wavey:

[maxspider3000]

thanks mohammed, unfortunately the competition had ended ... but I will try to complete it soon anyway-insha Allah-

thanks again for your care :)

[sabata]

Cool concept and even better rendering, too bad you didnt finish it on time :(
Btw always a fan of steampunk! I find it soo fun and amazing

[maxspider3000]

thanks sabata, I will try to finish this piece as soon as possible -isa-

you are right, I didn't know that steampunk is a great style till I participated on that challenge ... it's an amazing theme

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