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jobesu
11-12-2008, 07:17 AM
Joel Sundberg is entered in the "Steampunk Myths and Legends" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/steampunk/view_entries.php?challenger=15873)

Latest Update: Concept / pre-visualization: Cricket
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/22/15873/15873_1226607262_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=5491911#post5491911)

jobesu
11-12-2008, 10:19 AM
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First scetch on my pinocchio Steam robot.

paperclip
11-12-2008, 11:00 AM
Hey, I like that! What's going to be on his finger though?

Ravenslayer
11-12-2008, 11:30 AM
nice concept, is he having a smoke ? :d

keep it up

jobesu
11-12-2008, 02:13 PM
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Some more concept on the character.

jobesu
11-12-2008, 02:22 PM
paperclip : Thanks! My thought is to put some little creature on his finger that he looks at.
ravenslayer : Thanks! I can see what you mean :p maybe it would be cool if he smoked a big iron pipe .

M31
11-12-2008, 02:36 PM
My thought is to put some little creature on his finger that he looks at.

I really like that idea! :) And nice composition!

Intervain
11-12-2008, 02:44 PM
I love the ideas you've put down so far! Looking forward to more :buttrock:

liypfhe1
11-12-2008, 05:58 PM
maybe the creature can be jimmy cricket.. possible idea

mccg
11-12-2008, 09:31 PM
A good idea, also.
Lil thing, the warehouse could burst a bit more.
But sketch is well done.
Good luck!

Duajisin
11-12-2008, 10:25 PM
Looks fine ..and creepy, also :P
I`m curious though how will you manage to keep Pinocchio`s fairy image intact :)

mim-Armand
11-13-2008, 05:45 AM
wow!
it's the style I like bro!
the concept and idea look promising to me and sketches goes really great sofar
keep great works coming!

Go steam Pinocchio! go! :wip:

Canche
11-13-2008, 06:25 AM
I like your concept and the composition and the design. i can tell is going to look awesome. Keep the good work.

AUMAKUA
11-13-2008, 04:09 PM
Great concept and mood in your composition! good luck!

Legacy40k
11-13-2008, 04:32 PM
paperclip : Thanks! My thought is to put some little creature on his finger that he looks at.
ravenslayer : Thanks! I can see what you mean :p maybe it would be cool if he smoked a big iron pipe .

Maybe his father/creator could be on his hand?

I agree with the other poster that said putting some stresss on the warehouse would help give him some mass.

ivanisavich
11-13-2008, 05:17 PM
Oh that's soo awesome! Love your interpretation of the story...having Pinnochio a giant :D

jobesu
11-13-2008, 07:09 PM
Thanks for the input everyone!!!
Many great idés and inputs, i realy appreciate it :thumbsup::applause:.

Yea i thought about having his "dad" creator sitting on his finger /palm. but i think im going to put the cricket there.
The final image is going to be 3D so this is only concept,composition and mood sketches.
I think i'm gonna do a 3d/2d mattepainting for the background.
Just hope i got enough time =P

jobesu
11-13-2008, 07:11 PM
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New take on the scene.

jobesu
11-13-2008, 07:12 PM
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I'm not so sure about this head..abit to evil looking..

jobesu
11-13-2008, 07:14 PM
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The mysterious Cricket =)

Lordrych
11-13-2008, 07:30 PM
You know you should almost have him holding Jipetto, or however you spell his name. And have it be the circus that is destroyed underneath him, or the freak show he was part of. Just a suggestion but that would bring alot to the character and keep you on the story.

Amazing concepts though! I love em.

Baron

SideAche
11-14-2008, 01:16 AM
Nice start! I'm really liking the look of jipetto.

liypfhe1
11-14-2008, 03:32 AM
i know i suggested putting jimmy crickett on his finger, but that was before i realized that he was a giant and was sitting on a building.... it probably would be better to put gepetto... luv the somber mood that this portrays... keep it up

phoenix
11-14-2008, 04:04 AM
Joel - Your Concept sketch is really nice. The mood is nicely developed. SO far so Good. I have Two recommendations.

ONE - Try more Variations for the Environment, though Nothing wrong with your present one but try out something else :) may be its looks better.

TWO - OK for The main character, i have a humble recommendation. I think so far the character has dead expressionless face, Give him features. Pronounce them more. That will in my opinion give it personality. Something more we can easily relate to. I hope you get what i mean.


Lets see how everything progresses i will stay tuned :)

thank you and Best of luck.

Regards

skekTek
11-14-2008, 04:32 AM
TWO - OK for The main character, i have a humble recommendation. I think so far the character has dead expressionless face, Give him features. Pronounce them more. That will in my opinion give it personality. Something more we can easily relate to. I hope you get what i mean.

Great work! Love the setting.
I do agree with phoenix though, he needs a little more personality. Something we can empathize with. Remember, he was made as a child's toy. Although, I've seen some toys that even scare me a little. (Clown doll from the movie Poltergeist, :eek: !)

I like the "jimmy" cricket character. You called him mysterious, and that he is!

sasquatch70
11-14-2008, 05:26 AM
Wow! What a great subject. Very fitting for the challenge. My only worry is, when he tells a

lie he could destroy a whole village. LOL
Fantastic start!

Brad

FT
11-14-2008, 08:44 AM
Very cool stuff man looking sweet.....had the same idea and then saw your post ........aaarrgh.......scrap idea.... rethink ;]

FrozZT
11-14-2008, 09:42 AM
Sweeet, some cool stuff in here already. :) Love that last one.. I think that the characters look far more interesting than the environment/composition at the moment, maybe put some more work into that since you dont seem to have any trouble with your characters for sure, hehe. Keep it up and good luck!

-Niklas

RicoD
11-16-2008, 07:28 PM
Some amazing visuals Joel! Good luck !

BernardoDelgado
11-16-2008, 08:07 PM
great concept and mood ! I'll be tracking this one, great job

TeckZ
11-16-2008, 08:46 PM
Haaa!!! Nice work!!! Buratino steampunk ))

BUZZFX
11-26-2008, 05:43 PM
Joel, I love the night scene. Really looking forward to more! :)

elmasfeo
11-26-2008, 06:15 PM
wow, great designs, I like your concept, it's like taking pinoccio fairytale to the real world, I like the contrast between the colorful happy pinoccio we all have in our minds and this one... good job :)

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