Jinn Skyboarder

[djinn]

any comments?
suggestions... critiques?

[Neison]

The body's okay, but it's difficult to judge the proportions with the camera at an angle.

The head is another story -- did you use reference for this ? -- I'm assuming you're going for a fairly realistic look, but your proportions are off in several places. I don't have the time to make a list right now, but for starters, just fixing the position of the ear would do a great deal for the profile.

Bring the ear so it's in the center of the head horizontally, and then align it so the top is even with the eyebrow and the bottom is even with the under side of the nose.

In general, the head is also too small. I think using a good anatomy book would be the best place to compare and correct.

Hope I wasn't too blunt, just trying to help. :)

[djinn]

thanks for the critique
I shrunk it was cause I was told it was too big..
then someone else after that said the head was too big.. so I shrunk it again

yes you are right about the proportions in head
which is ok because I have got a good fix on things to change so here soon it will be finished

[djinn]

well new pic should be up later this wek i am reconstructing the face. i have relocated the ear.. must attach...

well pics up soon
thaks for crits=)

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