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JeeVz
11-09-2008, 08:21 PM
Hey,

It's been a while since I've posted anything. I have started on a new environment piece. I have had a lot of feedback that I need to vary my work style so I have decided to make a cartoon scene.

This is what I have so far.

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk9/Jeevan_Rupra_07/mushroom_render_02.jpg

any C&C welcome, cheers

iLegacy
11-09-2008, 10:03 PM
Nice work! I think you should do the ground more longer so the cut between sky and ground will be pushed more back into the picture. Add fog to hide the hard edge between ground and sky. I like the mushroom but the entry tunnel seems to end in the mushromm and also in the air...there is a part of it in the top/left and this ends in the air i think...

Go on!

JeeVz
11-09-2008, 10:15 PM
Cheers for the comment. I got a day off work tommorow so I will look into what you said. I was going to start texturing but I'll make the adjustments first. Will do an update hopefully tommorow.

JeeVz
11-10-2008, 02:39 PM
Render
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk9/Jeevan_Rupra_07/mushroom_render_03.jpg

Paintover
http://s276.photobucket.com/albums/kk9/Jeevan_Rupra_07/?action=view&current=mushroom_paint_over_render_01copy.jpg

Here is a slight update. I did do a paint over which I was working from. I think I will start texturing as It will allow me to see what I might to need to add into the scene etc. Regards to the flowers and grass I will most likely use opacity maps and see what it looks like and take it from there.

iLegacy
11-10-2008, 06:57 PM
He the second render is really great! I like the shape of the big mushroom very much :)

Vertex Groover
11-11-2008, 01:52 PM
looks good so far, don't be afraid to push the polys on this, since current gen games can handle alot more than the PS2 era.

keep at it! ;)

JeeVz
12-16-2008, 12:16 PM
It's been a while since I posted an update, havent really had time as I been working here are some updates of my work.


I Will most likely add more things into the back and foreground when I get time

Wireframe
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk9/Jeevan_Rupra_07/mushroom_render_presentation_wire.jpg

Render
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk9/Jeevan_Rupra_07/mushroom_render_presentation_08.jpg

JeeVz
01-14-2009, 10:44 AM
Finally got to finish my scene just wanted to see what people think :o)



http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk9/Jeevan_Rupra_07/mushroom_render_presentation_13.jpg
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk9/Jeevan_Rupra_07/mushroom_render_presentation_wir-1.jpg

iLegacy
01-14-2009, 11:21 AM
I think the modells are nice but you should rework de lighting to get mor interesting contrast. For example add fog to get mir deph to the scene and a moon/sunlight to get good shadows and something like that..

JeeVz
01-14-2009, 11:32 AM
cheers for the feedback yea I'll try and improve the lighting and see what can be done