Flower summoner

[CybrGfx]

Okay. I'll bite.

What is the flower summoner faction, and where are her pants?
Are her hands bound together? Why?
Is her head so small because all her energy makes the plants with the blue tongues?
What is the white drop running down the side of the breast?
It is sad when your breast is larger than your head...

I do not comprehend the point of this piece.
Is it supposed to be erotic in a harlequin/plant way, similar to Furries?
(With a somewhat offensive nickname such as "syphillis360," I have to assume it is some sort of twisted erotica...)
Is it supposed to be some avante garde fashion statement for the bondage botanist crowd?
It is telling the story of some poor princess kidnapped and forced to wear humiliating clothing in a very cold room, forced to wear shiny rubber socks under beautifully awesome shoes, while an evil loudspeaker on her hat sucks her brains out, turning them into blue flystrips?
What???

The shoes are killer. The rest of it looks like an overworked doodle by someone who hates color.
As a viewer, it tells no story, it provides no aesthetic pleasure, just confusion, and not confusion in an entertaining way, more similar to confusion and irritation at the confusion.

Fantasy work is fine. Imaginative work is fine. Whatever floats your cork and sails your boat, as the permissive saying goes...
But it is hard to critique such a vague, confusing work, with no backstory or background to help the viewer place the image in some sort of setting, fantasy or foolishness. It is just an odd drawing with bad color on a white background.

Clean linework
Bad anatomy proportions
Poor foreshortening
Poor flow
Unbalanced
No Rhythm
No Unity

Other than that, it's a nice piece.

~C

[wo0lF]

Clean linework
Bad anatomy proportions
Poor foreshortening
Poor flow
Unbalanced
No Rhythm
No Unity

Other than that, it's a nice piece.

~C


Made me lol'd!1111

[Pash]

Made me lol'd!1111

Show some respect. At least Cyber posted a real critique, you are not helping in any shape or form.

Hi syphilis360,

The problem is, your piece doesn't fit any style at all. The drawing itself is disjointed, the girls anatomy is all wrong. The colours are awful and don't complement each other at all.

I am going to beg you to call this one a crazy doodle and leave it where it is, you are not progressing any skills here and there is no chance in saving it as it is.

It is very usual for artists to mix botany and female presence in a piece, however this would not be a good example, you can do much better.

Cheers,

[wo0lF]

Show some respect.

I didn't mean anything bad.

No hard fillings and sorry for off.

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