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shadowholm
11-04-2008, 04:33 PM
Hello all,

Please help me with any critiques on this animation I'm working on for my demo reel! (I'm aware the other characters hand floats in on one of the shots.)

View My Video (http://tinypic.com/player.php?v=20f4ygw&s=4)

Thanks!
-Jason

Cbickel
11-06-2008, 12:04 PM
few things...
I think you might be exaggerating a little too much, calm it down a little... You should use exaggeration, but only to a certain degree.
Also you should smooth out the motions a little more. For example when the first character (George Clooney voice) waves his arm and leans in. You should slow the motion down a little. It seems like it happens to fast almost unbelievable. Same for the second character.

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