Sarah Poster, Mangesh Palkar (3D)

[mangu19sep]

here is other image thr is another image i ll post tht in another thread

http://www.cgtantra.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=6317&d=1225714171

[derex]

nice scene

[Trancos057]

nice composition and very sexy girl.

[Apophis3d]

nice composition and very sexy girl.

I agree, and I think you defiantly gave her, her own identity. The amount of detail you put into it is really good. I like the way you did the hair would you mind posting a wireframe view of her? I am curious of how you did the edge flow. Just recently started taking organic modeling classes at my college.

[mangu19sep]

I agree, and I think you defiantly gave her, her own identity. The amount of detail you put into it is really good. I like the way you did the hair would you mind posting a wireframe view of her? I am curious of how you did the edge flow. Just recently started taking organic modeling classes at my college.


thanx apophis3d for those kind words, here is a wire frame, one suggesion if u gonna follow this dont make tht dimond whr hand bends, like i did, coz it created problem while rigging, i had seen it somewhere & tried tht but it doesnt work


http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g10/275710/275710_1225782899_large.jpg

[Apophis3d]

Thank you for the tip. The wireframe looks really good.

[nandlaskar]

good work buddy.Nice character.
Overall proportions looks fine. :cool:

U can improve in some areas:
work on the shape and the form of the ribcage to pelvis area.Though its negligible in low poly models but silhouette does matter.
work on the hands too. doesn’t look natural.
work on the shape of the heels of the shoes.Looks weak, not bcos its thin. just go thru some high heel shoes on internet.Need some more attitude in the pose.Though I liked tghe pose on the lower right of the image. Try not to compose many pictures over the model.It brings distraction.

[mangu19sep]

good work buddy.Nice character.
Overall proportions looks fine. :cool:

U can improve in some areas:
work on the shape and the form of the ribcage to pelvis area.Though its negligible in low poly models but silhouette does matter.
work on the hands too. doesn’t look natural.
work on the shape of the heels of the shoes.Looks weak, not bcos its thin. just go thru some high heel shoes on internet.Need some more attitude in the pose.Though I liked tghe pose on the lower right of the image. Try not to compose many pictures over the model.It brings distraction.


hey thanx for the comments, m working on male character now & will study the anatomy properly hope u will b happy with my next character, the right side pose i was going to post in other thread but they didnt accepted as it is in this thread also so m posting it here




http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g10/275710/275710_1225863925_large.jpg


Ao pass

http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g10/275710/275710_1225875387_large.jpg

wire frame

http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g10/275710/275710_1225784931_large.jpg

[animking]

GOOD JOB, DUDE...:applause:

[Rofideo]

Thanks pal

I apply for a job at game industry and am study lowpoly

Looks realy well :thumbsup:

Keep the good work

[mangu19sep]

Thank you all u guys for ur comments

[reiv]

Hi, nice work! Two lil crits: maybe you could have used some alpha to get better hair, and your model doesn't seem to have edge loops aroud the mouth on the wireframe. That would be pretty important if you're planning to make her talk. Anyways, good job dude!
Cheers,
Olivier.

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