View Full Version : DAF XFwip please some crits...
mmwizard 06-12-2003, 06:42 PM Hello everybody..
This moment i'm workink on a DAF XF model and i need some ctits before i finish the model. I've build it in MAX 4.2 and it's a total 3d model without any textures (Only 1 Reflection map). If you have any crits on the model please write some sugestions about how i can improve it.... thanks in advance....
http://www.fictief.com/miscafb/daf.jpg
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graffb
06-12-2003, 07:01 PM
No comment!
Very good! :)
kilroy
06-12-2003, 09:01 PM
:thumbsup: i got nothing for crits i think it is looking good and i dont think you need to change a thing.
This is excellent. Can't wait to see it finished. Did you use blueprints and if so where did you get them? Was it done by Box modelling?
I am trying to learn 3D using Cinema 4D and would love to have a go at a truck.
mmwizard
06-16-2003, 03:11 PM
Hi,
Here is a litle update of my DAF XF... I hope u like it..
And 2 PGJG:
Well i didn't exactly use blueprints, but for the sideview i used a small line drawing and for the frontview a photo. I found these on the DAF website...
During modeling i use different kind of techniques. I use for the smooth curves nurbs modeling and for the remaining objects i start mostly with a primitive like a chamferBox and convert it to a editble mesh with a subdivision of 1. And then it's a matter of patience and precision...
http://www.fictief.com/miscafb/DAF_XF02.jpg
smoke
06-16-2003, 03:15 PM
Looks excellent so far
graffb
06-16-2003, 03:25 PM
Little metalic... NO?
but otherwise very good
I'm speechless. Being a truck driver myself I think I know a good truck when I see one. Marks out of 10? 2000.
Keep posting the updates.
mmwizard
06-17-2003, 07:42 AM
Thank you PGJG and i will keep you all informed...
And Graffb it's true that it looks a bit metalic but i did'nt spend much time and effort in the materials yet. But today i'll well spend more time on the materials....:p
mmwizard
06-17-2003, 12:13 PM
Well i'm almost finished. Just have to ad some minor things like a horn, lighting the scene etc.
So like to hear what you think...
http://www.fictief.com/miscafb/DAF_XF03.jpg
graffb
06-17-2003, 12:45 PM
Nice but the plastic parts are too smooth. Needs to be a little bumpy.
I'm talking about something like this...
Its getting better all the time. I'm getting jealous as well. Don't forget the wipers and the fifth wheel and the susies.
Will you be doing a tutorial for the DAF?
mmwizard
06-17-2003, 06:34 PM
Well....
For now this model is finished. Later this month i'll be back on this one for the inside of the Truck. Then i'll include the motor and the interior of the cabine....
For me i reached my goal to build a prety realistic Truck... So if you like it or not feel free to ad you'r comments.
http://www.fictief.com/miscafb/DAF_XF_FIN.jpg
Thanx..
Ohh and PGJG there a lot of usefull tutorials about building vehicles... Look at the WIP from graffb...
smoke
06-17-2003, 06:38 PM
Looking good.
Are the headlights just a texture? They look a little bland.
Other then that its coming out great. Going to do the interior?
Maybe a trailer or two?
SUPERB :thumbsup: Give us a rear view and a wireframe view. Thanks
RmachucaA
06-17-2003, 07:33 PM
make it a race truck! I started doing a race truck myself a month ago, but havent done anything yet, im doing a racing version, a MAN race truck. Your model tho looks sweet, a bit high poly maybe. Nice job. BTW, the purple looks bd in my opinion, change it to a more pleasing colour unless thats the eact same color the real truck uses and you want it to be exact.
GJ. keep at it
It wasn't me who made the Truck. It was mmwizard
Nice model, looks pretty cool to me. Drives a lot on the road here in The Netherlands (but you already knew that ;) )
To RmachucaA: DAF only participated in races with the DAF 75, there never was a 95 race truck. But nevertheless this model could be turned into a race model. That's why it's CG! :)
To mmwizard. I had to take your DAF image to use as the wallpaper for my desktop. I hope you don't mind.
mmwizard
06-18-2003, 07:42 AM
Hi i'm surpriced by the reactions... thanks to you all.
I will alter the truck later this week because i'm very busy at work. So the things like the tyers, the frontlight image etc. will be changed later this week.
Tody i'll post some other pics like the refrence i used, a wireframe and a larger image ....
(RmachucaA) I like the idea to turn it into a Race model but where can i find pictures with racetrucks??? or do you mean those from Paris Dakar.
stdriver
09-07-2003, 04:59 PM
hmmmm you shuld bulid the interior too the ratt..
I modeled many trucks here at http://truckpol.prv.pl/ forum under Fan Art you see my model trucks my name is tiger
ok to help you here is the best car matrial tips http://www.danielbuck.net/tire_tut/tiretut.htm
good luck and if you make more trucks post it at truckpol forum too...
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