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so ,
this is my very first Aeroplane
and pretty much my very first complex Mechanic modeling
so its being pretty hard ,so far like 5-8 hours of work (yup.. alot ,because i am not sure exactly what modeling to use.. so i get stuck alot :) )
anyways ,here it is
this is a really important model actually ,since
its a tryout for the Army 3d department ,so
i really need you to crit me harsh ,i mean really rip it a part
so here it is ,
http://www.goldmanland.com/pic/wip2.jpg
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Songbird
06-12-2003, 11:44 AM
a good start!
i think the gap on the nose is too conspicuous:)
keep on it!
thank you man :)
but my english is a tad weak ,mind explaning what did you mean by "conspicuous"?
if it means too round ,yup i fixed that ,not in thie update i show now ,but i allrdy fixed it ,just too lazy to open up photoshop again :)
here is minor update ,mainly fighting topology and very small tweaks ,good day!
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16522165.jpg
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16522191.jpg
no replies ? :(
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16529678.jpg
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16529708.jpg
While ,mering both sides of the aeroplane , i made a small mistake in the back of the cockpit ,so don't pay attention to it :)
some refernce
http://lynx.uio.no/jon/gif/aircraft/su27-1.jpg
http://www.afwing.com/intro/su27/su27-3d.jpg
GavinG
06-12-2003, 06:26 PM
Hey man,
not looking too bad. Keep in mind when it comes to jets or machinery of anykind i'm really blind...so here goes.
Where the engine/booster tips are the body looks a little odd, just where the wins attach to the body...maybe it should be thicker?
On the refs it just looks wider than on the model :)
Good Stuff, keep it up
Gav
hmm ,i think you mean the back part and the engines?
well the engines are pretty much just standing there right now :)
and all the back part is not touched really (cuz i am a bit confused of how its really built..lol), so yea its not made yet :)
thanks!
Stimpy
06-12-2003, 07:07 PM
looking ok so far.. only thing looking odd would be the "neck" of it. i think its too thin compared to the picture..
also where the "neck" extends towards the wings, i think it could be a bit wider and also rounder..
dun have photoshop here right now or i would do a quick draw over..
stinger
06-13-2003, 04:37 AM
The cockpit looks a bit narrow and merge with fuselage too smoothly. The leadingedge of your wings is thick.
You can get the hi-res su-27 blueprints at here:
http://www.airwar.ru/other/draw/su27.html
fianls in school :( no time..
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16578988.jpg
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16579029.jpg
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16579164.jpg
robertp
06-13-2003, 11:10 PM
So far it looks good. I have a problem with the back and the engines. I would Make a curve that mimics the edge of each plate that covers the engine and connects it to the body of the plane. That way you can then loft a surface across the curves then break up the surface and convert into polys. That is if you are using NURBS.
Rob:D
Peregrine
06-14-2003, 09:08 AM
The backs of the engines are called turkey feathers. They are formed of a bunch of overlapping plates, like the feathers on a bird's tail. These expand and contract slightly when you throttle up/down. Kind of like one of those veggie steamer things. Be glad you are doing a 27 and not a 37, thrust vectoring is annoying to model in if you don't understand the way it works.
Also, I'd model the airbrake, given that you seem to have done the other control surfaces.
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16668098.jpg
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16658193.jpg
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16658214.jpg
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16658236.jpg
so i am done modeling..
this is not the most recent ,i have atached everything in the back..
and the texture is obviously a temp..
crit a way :)
Stimpy
06-15-2003, 09:56 PM
maybe its just the material but that white nose should be as wide as the part it attaches to methinks. right now it looks a bit stuck on
also that thing sticking out at the back should be wider and looks rather weird in general right now.
final :
expect weapons..which will be done tommrow
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16669508.jpg
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16669548.jpg
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/16669669.jpg
oh the white thing is the same length ,its a spec illusion :)
about the back thing! great call ,i hardly noticed ,very valuable crit ,will fix ,really saved me :)
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