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dawei661 10-28-2008, 07:17 AM http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ml-3xwcYcnU
My show,
Please criticism
Thank you very much
I am a freedom of animation workers
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Delucubus
10-28-2008, 09:19 PM
A little constructive criticism - you could completely cut the first half. The animation in the second half is better and the music in the beginning is too distracting.
This will help to shorten and focus you reel. Also, if there are any shots on there that don't represent your current skills remove them.
dawei661
10-30-2008, 11:01 AM
Thank you very much
I will continue to work hard
mrtprodz
10-30-2008, 11:20 AM
I loved the first part and the car animation on the second part is impressive :thumbsup:
The dragon scene looks great too, I on the other side, did not enjoyed so much
the second part of the reel. I think the first part let us focus more on the animation
because of the clay render.
Anyway, great work!
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