PDA

View Full Version : Paladin:Metal Masters:Newest Render, Nedd Jacobs (3D)

Stonefist
10-26-2008, 10:48 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g81/14681/14681_1225061330_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g81/14681/14681_1225061330_large.jpg)

Title: Paladin:Metal Masters:Newest Render
Name: Nedd Jacobs
Country: USA
Software: Lightwave 3D

This is my Main Character Paladin,for My Series which is in Progress. This was Modeled and rendered using Newtek's Lightwave 3D 9.5. I am Looking for Professional Critigue as this will Be to Better My work in the future.
David-J
10-27-2008, 05:36 AM
good effort.

Unfortunately it's very hard to comment on it because you can barely see it. Try improving the lighting so you can see the details of the model. Also try to stay away from default T poses. It always looks so much better when you pose your model.

Cheers!
carlmentier
10-27-2008, 10:26 AM
nerf pala! :)
phoenix
10-31-2008, 08:58 AM
sweet


regards
Stonefist
11-09-2008, 06:35 AM
David Carl and Pheonix thank you for the Comments I appreaciate them


David- I am Currently working on a modeling reel and should have some better lit Pics soon with a Lighter background. I appologize for the Static T pose, As I am currently Trying to Rig this character for Animation and it is By far My worst Attribute. But A Pose that is worthy of this character is comming soon. Just working out some issues with the Shoulder pads.

As this will Be for a Personal Project of mine, I am trying to get the best i possibly can before putting up. just wanted to get some feedback as to the design. the Model reel will feature The wires as well. Had a Few issues with My system so Should be ready In two weeks.

Again Thank you all for your Support... :)
LukeZ
11-22-2008, 06:36 PM
nice work Stonefist character look's verry good! only critics maby boots & heands needs little improvments but.... maby... you need render another perspective view to better character look :]
keep it up!
looking for more progress
peace
CGTalk Moderation
11-22-2008, 06:36 PM
This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.