Female Head

[Jango]

wow, up to here, very nice..
are the ears a bit too high? or is it just the perspective?
give us some other views, and maybe wireframe..

[rodrigoaiz]

Well, i dont think that the ears are low or high or something, maybe its for the perspective, but look the front view, i think its correct, isn´t it?
Here the wire, i think its no so complex and intersting :rolleyes: but, it works.
And also, thanks for your answer:D
http://www.iespana.es/r0dr160/nuevtextojos2.jpg
http://www.iespana.es/r0dr160/wire.gif

[rodrigoaiz]

No more replies? Well i see every one its tired of heads, ill try to finish by myself and then i may post in the finishe works.:shrug:

[TheWraith]

don't be so impatient sheesh :P a lot of people probably aren't helping because it takes a friggin' 5 minute wait for those pictures to load and i'm on broadband... so find a diff't host and more people will help. to begin with, your model is WAY too sharp. the face should be smooth all around. get rid of all those nasty edges around the brow area, they're creating a sharp crease in the mesh. you also have way too many edges running down the center of the nose which is not only a waste of poly's but also creating a nasty sharp nose. spread the nose out a little bit up towards the brow area and inbetween the eyes. there eyes may be the proper distance aprt but if they are then the nose is much too thin. the nostrils look like they might need to be widened a little bit (not much). also, the lips are WAAAY too sharp. lips are more defined by their color and not so much their shape. they are nice and rounded and soft, i'd be afraid to kiss that chick cuz i'd be affraid she'd cut me with her stiff upper lip :surprised the last thing i'll point out is the jaw.... there isn't one! the small chin she has seems to disappear and run in a straight "V" line up to the cheeks and ears. If you are going for an anime look then the head shape is fine... but if you want it more realistic the head should be much more square than it is now. look at the size of her dome (head) and notice that she looks like an alien with that non-existant jawline. bring the jaw out so that the front profile of the head runs straight down from the bottom of the ear to about the side of the lips and then begins slowly comming in to the chin. also... ears don't have a ring running through the front.... you have the outter ring running from the bottom of the ear (lobe) up around the top and the front connects to the jaw... right now it looks like she has ear muffs or something on.

k... thats all the critiques i have :) don't take them hard. if this is one of your first heads it's turning out MUCH nicer than mine did. it took me SEVERAL tries to get something that looked even remotely human and even then it didn't look like the human it was modeled after. practice practice practice and reference reference reference. begin looking at peoples faces, particularly eyes, nose, lips, ears, mouth and jaw. if you've been in art for awhile and had critiques before then i know you'll take this critique the way it was intended and not get upset but rather glad that you know the flaws and the areas you need to work on. anyways... best of look. i wouldnt start this model over from scratch, i would get rid of that extra geometry and make the tweaks... a couple days worth of work and this head could easily be made into a photoreal head. ;)

[rodrigoaiz]

Well, first i want to thank all your critics, thanks a lot :D, and dont worry if i can get upset,:scream: i think the best way to do this things well its whit all the critics and comentes, so really, thanks.
But honestly, i dont know if i will be able to correct them all, because i want to finish it soon, and then start with other proyect or something, im tired of this one, i know that it isnt percect, but im quite happy whit it, its my first model, i know that my next chick will be better and more realistic. i didnt use so many references, all its in my mind, and i see that my mind its not so correct :D, so in the next one, ill use references, i started this one with the joan acr tutorial.
Again, thanks for your coments:beer:

Sorry again for the english, im trying, really:p

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