Yet another female model WIP!!! :o)

[Dave Black]

Ok, first off, you probably would get more crits if you actually posted the image on site. That way it appears here, and people don't have to go off site to view it.

Second, let me say that the model is looking really good so far. The musculature is pretty good, if a bit defined for a woman, but still the "super hero" look is probably what you are going for. And, you puilled it off.

The knees really bug me, and the overall vertical proportions, seem a bit off as well.

All in all, it's a great start. Now give 'er a head and you'l be on your way to a pretty cool model.

-3DZ

:D

[Bapsis]

Thanks for the image tip, will try to embed it in this post here. And thank you for the comments, i will work on the knees to try and get them more natural looking.

http://wave.prohosting.com/bapsis/4.jpg

(Hopefully that image works in the message....) :)

Cheers!!!

Matt

*EDIT*

Hmmm, looks like the site dosent allow linking to just images, i appologies about that. I will look for a provider that does in the near future. Until then if you could just click on the link to see i would very much appreciate it!!! :)

Matt

*/EDIT*

[TheWraith]

it looks like the shirt or whatever is just going to fall down on it's own. like it's just hanging there defying gravity. theres no straps over the shoulder to hold it up so i think if you make the breasts look like they're being "lifted" by the tight shirt and raise them up and stick them out more it might look a little better. right now they look like they're just hanging down and the shirt is just sort of there. you don't want a lot of detail in the knees but you don't want cylindrical buldges either. theres too much "pop" going on. can't really tell whats goin' on in the area of the tricep... is she wearing a band like the other arm or is the tricept just popping out that much? a bit distracting how it is. the rest of the body, legs, stomach, neckline and all look very well done. just those small minor tweaks is all i'd suggest. can't wait to see her with a head! she will have a head right? :surprised

[Bapsis]

Hey all,

Here is another WIP of my progress, still have to click the link but i am working on getting remotely linked images that i can embed in the posts here very soon. When i do i will come back and edit this post so that the pics are right here.

But for now, if you could go to:

http://wave.prohosting.com/bapsis/fem_wip6.html

:and let me know what you think, i would greatly appreciate the feedback!!! :)

Matt


Blend on, and blend well!!!

PS: This was also done with Blender 2.23...

[Bapsis]

Ok, i have a host that allows hotlinking of images, so this embeded image thing should work now...

http://65.26.37.146/www/bapsis/fem_wip7.jpg

Hopefully this is alot easier for you guys to check out now, i'm just about to move onto the head soon so comments on the body are definatly appreciated... :)

Cheers,

Matt

[DigitalCrystal]

:cool: Hot stuff man. I think that the body's shape is looking good. She looks like she's been to the gym every other day for the last 5 years :)

As for other critiques:

I think you should add a zipper to the side of the boots :p They just look like they could never get them off without one. The bikini around the but area looks a bit too tall and thick. What I mean is, for the thickness of that cloth, the definition of the cheeks wouldn't be so obvious. I would go with something a little thinner, and a little lower around the hips... man, I love those string bikinis :love: :thumbsup:

Over all, looking good though!:thumbsup:

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