beauitiful palce, gurpreet mittul soni (2D)

[gmsoni]

hi all i am adding the making of my digital painting . i dont know know how to add at the same time so i adding it in a new post reply

[jagmohan]

nice compositing and a nice painting...

keep it up....:applause:

[gmsoni]

thanks for ur comments

[debashishbj]

hey i really like the mood and feel.

some crits ..
a) some light form the small house is bouncing off the ground in front .. but some are not ..

b) the perspective is not correct, draw some lines on the right parallel to ur canvas. not ur painting but ur canvas. it has to be straight.

cheers

[gmsoni]

hey thanks dat realy helpful comments i will improve that.

[Splateffects]

:applause:

nice one .. i like the way " The point of view " is made a li'll random ... adds some reality to the scene.

one more thought ... the overall lighting of the image seems dis balanced... the amount of light moon throws in sky is not matching with the glow of lights in foreground...

if it is a deliberate effect then m sorry m jus an amateur maybe im wrong. :p

[gmsoni]

thanks for ur feedback the glow of light is coming through the lights on the window not wid moon is reflecting is aura in the cloud its not disbalansing light its just kind of my visualisation . But i will take of all this technical points in future . thanks a ton

[leocda]

I liked the background.

[gmsoni]

hey thanks its realy feel gud if someone appriciate our efforts

[CGNitro]

hi,,,is this final or is there some more thing to be done,,it looks still very rude or in scribbles ,, get to work more on bigger brush sizes and soften it or sharpen details.

[gmsoni]

hi i dlibrately kept it scribles and rude its comepelety done thanks for ur feedback

[gmsoni]

hi,,,is this final or is there some more thing to be done,,it looks still very rude or in scribbles ,, get to work more on bigger brush sizes and soften it or sharpen details.

scribbles = its nothing also a kind of artwork where artsit use hard stroke to keep d artwork raw its a kind of tradition way of doing art work, so its acctualy my style to keep it like dis. may be i am not able to explain it tecnicaly with technical terms but i delebrately kept a raw look of my painting

[anoopverma]

good job only balancing in light is missing work more on lights

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