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[mstl]

Je to moc pekne. Sice....a nebo radej nic. Pekna prace...moc.
:bounce:
:applause:

[OceanMachine45]

I like it...gives a pretty eerie/grim feeling.


Nice Soilwork signature!!

[REZI-st]

:applause: :bounce: this work is very nice :buttrock: :drool: hehehe (only for czech : je to velice zdaøilá práce, jen tak dál ;) )

[Magic]

i like the scene, but only the shoes of the character are a bit off. they look just like some adidas-sneakers / sportshoes. but that's just an detail. i couldn't do it any better. (like: mine would be way worse :) )

[E.Z. Schwartz]

Looks cool. The hand holding the staff needs some fixing though I think. If you grab something like that your fingers will be tight together, you shouldn't see any gaps at all. It'd actually be really hard if not impossible to hold it like that. I think that should be something easy to fix but help a lot, if you decide to go back in and change it.

[TES]

wow.......too much posts?:) i´m surprised....thank all my czech friends:)
E.Z. Schwartz->i know this problem.....but this work is finished,and how i sayd in wip section...i need to learn rigging better:(
magic->tnx:)) those adidas shoes....i liked to do something semi-fantasy...

thanks for all your replys

[mstl]

Cesti grafici prece drzi spolu,ne? :beer:

[loocas]

Yep, I was one of those who saw this before in W.I.P. section man! And even then I was saying that's cool and awesome! So no change for now! It's simply gorgeous! :xtreme: Czechs are totaly great artist, am I right?

Samozøejmì, že mám pravdu, ne?! :thumbsup: :beer:

[TES]

thank you all guys!!!i´m really happy that you like it!!

[TES]

loocas.....thank you man!!:) i´m really glad ...... CZECH ARTIST ARE THE BEST:)all over the world:)

[TES]

no more posts?:(

[Teardrop]

It looks pretty good....actually it looks darn cool...but..

Yeah those sneakers are a bit of a mood killer. But more importantly I know the focus is on the character but the environment/background seems a bit too bright. Play with the green lights of his hands and from below. Make the scene 3 levels darker...especially the background BUT keep the guy lit - add some green light. Make it look like the enironment is lit from the bottom and the torcjes etc. It might make it creepier that way.
At the moment the uniform of light doesn't aid in focussing on the character (and his funky looking stuff).

I know it would probably be a pain to test render and re-render with 650k of polys but....luck :p

[Prs-Phil]

Yeah I have to agree with my british future citizen here. Not that I´m going to be nationalistic like the czech guys here (that have seemed to registered here to praise their m8, but thats no prob ;) ) but 11.08.03 and I´m british :scream:

Like Teardrop said, the pic hasent really got anything to focus on, not that its bad but the greenish color kills.
I actually dont mind the sneekers, I think they make him look cool, just like the boy next door killing a few people and showing of their heads.
If you look at his eyes and his expression he looks a bit like: "Duh, wtf is that in my hand, I just didnt, oh no ... not again" ;) ... change that and make him look a touch more evil.
Give the walls more dirt, dont copy the wooden planks, give them holes, make them look burnet, make the chain or what ever he has got hanging around him really look what its supposed to be.

All in all, put some extra ellbow grease into it and you will have a really cool picture, not just a semi cool one.

:airguitar

[TES]

thank you guys:))hmm my next worx will be better ..i promisse:)i will try:)

[Prs-Phil]

no no, give it a bit more time and put the pic in your portfolio. :thumbsup:

[mage111]

Hey TES, it looks great now that its done :D, and glad you fixxed that pesky rendering problem you posted in your WIP.

my only crits are these:

the staff seems to be going through the chain from the way i look at it
and the way the guy is holding the staff seems quite flimsy like (only word i could think of) like if he was holding the staff and and green flame coming from his other hand, i would suspect or assume he would be grasping that staff so tight that his knuckles would be turning white (little far fetched on white knuckles but i think you know what i mean)

anyways man, im only criting it because i like it so much :-)
great work man

[TES]

thank you guys.....i will repair that hand problem...

[TES]

holy sh*t!!!!it can´t be!!the final rigged scene is corrupted:(i can´t repair it:(this final image is really final:/

[Prs-Phil]

uh shit, I hate when that happens ... sry m8

[clojster]

Peknej orazek :applause: , ale hosi neprehanite to tak trochu s tim nacionalismem? :shame: Aby tu z toho nebyla takova mala 3dgrafika... ;)

[TES]

Prs-Phil ->it´s the most interesting thing on 3Dmax:)
yEd->tak to nehrozi:)) navic s tim zacal loocas:)

[mstl]

yEd: To snad ne. 3dgrafika posledni dobou stoji za nic. Tady ti to zhodnoti aspon prfici (tim nerikam, ze ja jsem profik...spis nejsem) a taky poradi kdyz mas problem. S tim jsem se na 3dgrafice nesetkal...az na vyjimky.

:buttrock:
CGtalk rulezzz
:buttrock:

[TES]

hey all.....am back with total final scene with the mage....i dont like to work on it more.... i like to model characters ,not to do whole env.....sory

i did the new scene more darker and with DOF

i repaired the main problems with hand holding staff,changed
"adidas" shoes for some heavy leather boots :shrug:
http://www.tes.euweb.cz/mage/final.jpg

i will render the scene without DOF and all materials to show you all details...

[REZI-st]

I think that first picture was more original :buttrock: This has better atmospheres :thumbsup: , but both of them they are super :applause: :beer:

[TES]

tnx rezi-st :) first work is always original:)

[Rei Ayanami]

I like it, somone I want to meat down a dark alley (so i can beat ****less...) smoke is strange but ok.
first was better, the white shoes show that it could be ANYONE. and lose the green light.

[TES]

here is render without textures....ónly models and one lighthttp://www.tes.euweb.cz/mage/whole_smaller.jpg

[mstl]

TES Rulezz.....

Dost namakane a mnohem..mnohem lepsi nez to pred tim. Jen tak dal :o). MASTER.

:buttrock:
:applause:



:wavey: ...your PADAVAN :wavey:

[clojster]

Yes, I like it much more than the first one. The green light brings into it one good thing - great atmosphere, and one bad thing - every colour of your textures perishes in the green overflow...
Overall Great! Could you please post bigger render? (This is too small) :beer: :thumbsup:

[TES]

tnx guys:)
yEd ->vetsi render?proc boha?:) uz sem toudle scenou fakt znechucenej,takze uz to prerenderovavat nebudu.....navic podle me todle staci:))ohledne ty barevsnosti....kdyz prece vychazi hlavni svetlo z ty jamy a je zeleny,tak jakou barvu by mela mmit asi cela scena?:)navic sem zabejslel to cely udelat tak nejak do zelena

[loocas]

To TES: You know man, there is no problem with models or textures, but you have BIG ones with lighting and whole compositing the scene. It's very hard task, I know, but you HAVE TO LEARN this sooner or later! Buy some books about general problems of lighting... 'Coz I thing it's very important part of an ART! And composition will come to you automatically, you'll see! Anyways, I liked the first version more, it has more color variations, this one is a bit fade... :thumbsup:

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