2D: Bath

[Aros]

The neck looks like it's broken.. The paint over is soft and non-detailed. The drawing itself is quite good :)

[Nerv]

Thanks for your crit.....
I'll make it better next time....... if i have enough money to buy a wacom... :)

[Nerv]

I've made some changes on it..... as your crit...
I've sharpen some part and even changed some colour.
Hope it's better now.

http://www.getcybered.com/sites/nervever/data/home/bath5.jpg

[Wolfzbane]

I kinda like the dreamy airbrush feel to it.
I think you deserve a medal just to have done this with a mouse instead of a tablet.
I can't even write my name with a mouse, lol.

[k-man]

boob job eh?

[Nerv]

Thanks for the crit guys,
i've done some final touch up on water waves and certain parts..
And that's all.... and again....thanks guys.

http://www.getcybered.com/sites/nervever/data/home/sbath1.jpg

http://www.getcybered.com/sites/nervever/data/home/sbath2.jpg

http://www.getcybered.com/sites/nervever/data/home/sbath3.jpg

This is the final......I hope, because i have not enough time to "play" with it any more...:)

http://www.getcybered.com/sites/nervever/data/home/bath6.jpg

[Tex3D]

To get her neck back that far wouldn't her back have to be more arched and therefore her breasts would be pointing further up??

I think the extreme angle of the neck is the only thing slowing this drawing down. It looks like you are forcing us to see her face, but the neck is just too extreme.

If you really wanna shopw the face and boobs that badly IMHO I would suggest at least arching her back and relaxing the poor girl's neck. Other than that the painting is good.:thumbsup:

-Dave

Poor baby prolly has a headache from all that neck action already.:hmm:

[Nerv]

:surprised
I didn't expect more crits.... thanks, and i truelly appriciate them.
Thanks..... now i can do nothing on it, but i'll improve in my future work, i swear!

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