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techwarp
10-09-2008, 10:03 PM
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Title: Apples
Name: Raul Fabian
Country: Romania
Software: Blender

Hello, I recently made the jump to Blender and here is my first image.
The image is rendered with Yafray.
C&C welcome!
Bye.
LMCdesign
10-10-2008, 12:02 AM
its nice ! Maybe in a cene this looks more real... and a think the apples don't have so much gloss. But its very good man !
island1985
10-10-2008, 03:10 AM
Delicious..... ?:bounce:can i have one ?
marcotronic
10-10-2008, 05:23 AM
very realistic! I think the apples are just perfect. The only crit I have is the ground plane - it looks a bit splotchy - some render settings I suppose... Anyway - very nice!


Marco
ToddD
10-10-2008, 12:23 PM
I agree, this is nice! The splotchiness needs work, and IMO it would be much more interesting in an environment.

Nice work!

T.
techwarp
10-10-2008, 12:48 PM
Yes I agree with the darker spots.

The spots are coming from my HDRI map, but I had no other for this scene.

Thanks for the comments
LukeZ
10-10-2008, 06:17 PM
goody:D
nice objects, textures only ground looks like low gi settings but good job i want one apple please :D
cheers
Tzrnutt
10-10-2008, 06:31 PM
Yes I agree with the darker spots.

The spots are coming from my HDRI map, but I had no other for this scene.

Thanks for the comments

Can you blur the HDRI? You have no sharp reflections so it shouldn't have any adverse effect there. It normally helps calm things down when I do it in C4D.
sanyilajos
10-10-2008, 07:05 PM
Nice apples!, i like the way they shine even if it's too shiny, it has a more idealistic look, like in commercials.
But the scene is empty, and the composition is a bit disturbing, i get the feeling that the apples are falling out to the right bottom of the screen. You need to solve the spots and find a better point of view. :) ( you could take an apple out , and put it next to the basket or what ever its is called. hmm ... sorry just thinking :D )
diegoloza
10-10-2008, 08:26 PM
good job man!!!
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