Audi R8, David Coles (3D)

[afrosharpner]

Repost and extra images.

[Kingcreation]

Great looking model keep it up! Idea from Ironman maybe... just watched it last night, has really good CG stuff in it.

[nightwisher]

Repost and extra images.Good work! Keep on working!

[vincent818]

Its a very nice model, and its very well done.

But, i did find some issue's.
1) The mesh grill under the left taillight has a reflection on it. That should be a simple fix, from here it looks like all that is, is that you have a plane with the image of the grill, just take the spec off of it.
2) The Car itself looks like a Toy Model or a hot wheels car. Still doesn't have that Photo real look to it.
3) The Background and the Reflections on the paint don't mesh together. The light wall next to car would most likely have more of an effect on the car. Maybe Work on the shader a little more.
4) It looks like there is some stretching going on, on the mesh grill under the right side headlight.

Besides these things, the vehicle looks great. keep at it!

hope this helped :)

-Vincent Rosas

[afrosharpner]

Its a very nice model, and its very well done.

But, i did find some issue's.
1) The mesh grill under the left taillight has a reflection on it. That should be a simple fix, from here it looks like all that is, is that you have a plane with the image of the grill, just take the spec off of it.
2) The Car itself looks like a Toy Model or a hot wheels car. Still doesn't have that Photo real look to it.
3) The Background and the Reflections on the paint don't mesh together. The light wall next to car would most likely have more of an effect on the car. Maybe Work on the shader a little more.
4) It looks like there is some stretching going on, on the mesh grill under the right side headlight.

Besides these things, the vehicle looks great. keep at it!

hope this helped :)

-Vincent Rosas

thanks for the coments, i did notice the problem with the grills but i havent had the time to fix it and repost it.

as for the other coments, they are very helpfull and i will keep them in mind for the future.

i just rememberd that there is a row of lights above the car that may answer your comment about the reflections.

[Bignanfer]

Hi there, very nice model indeed, but I'll try to avoid add too much blur/bloom effects on the image.

Looking forward to see more works from you.

[afrosharpner]

For those who are interested here is a revised image.

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