Hungry Birds - Feed Me!

[koinu]

Well the wood is too square, you have a texture that is old looking so the wood should look as if it is old and bumpy. The leafs are nasty, some of them have no branches to support them, seems even some of them are floating in space. Is this a tree you made or a plug-in.. **Wonders and ponders**:hmm:

[wgreenlee1]

Headed in the right direction.
The tree needs some better leaves though,look kinda copied and paste.

[randyrives]

Thanks for the comments. Yeah the tree is from a plug-in. Really first time using it, so I may need to learn it better, or dump it all together.

[randyrives]

Ok made several changes, hopefully for the better.

1) changed view angle.
2) worked on the leaves.
3) increased bump on wood texture
4) rendered with radiosity.

Let me know what ya'll think of the changes and where I still need work.

Thanks! http://www.rrives.com/c4d8/birdfeeder6_rad.jpg

[koinu]

WAY BETTER:thumbsup: Things I would change are
1. Make the edges of the wood more beaten up, bump will do it if you make your own
2. Build your own tree!!!!! Plug-ins are cheap and nasty
3. The color map loks repeated in places..

Keep it up..:thumbsup:

[randyrives]

Thanks!

I will work on a tree. Not very good at painting a map, but I think that I need to , to fix the repeating texture.

[CGTalk Moderation]

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.