Cinematic Game Icons - character - JeyJey

[JeyJey]

Here is a sketch.
What do you mean? :wavey:

http://www.jeyjeys-world.de/cgtalk/elf_sketch.jpg

many greetings
JeyJey

[JeyJey]

Now I have finished the body, arms and legs... :)
The wire comes tomorrow.....I can't keep my eyes open.
C&C welcome :bounce:

http://www.jeyjeys-world.de/cgtalk/Elf_views.JPG

[Nicodemia]

Very nice work JeyJey. Very fast too. No wonder you can't keep your eyes open!

BTW. I'm a C4D user. Are you using chanlum? If so, doesn't it really slow down the renders for these WIPs and is it worth mastering?

[JeyJey]

Thank you Nicodemia :)

The last two days I had mutch time...I only work on this ;)
My girlfriend was the model... nearly ;)
No, its not chanlum. I use the bhodiNUT Fresnel shader.


Thanks for your comment :beer:

[DimitrisLiatsos]

Nice modeling...and i always liked the look of a fresnel shader:thumbsup:

[Nicodemia]

ah. Good old freshnel. Well it looks nice. The proportions are excellent. No balloon breasts or pencil legs. Can't wait for more :bounce:

[JeyJey]

I have change my concept :bounce:
This Elf lives in a hightechnical world.

I added some clothes. Textures are temporary.
What do you think?

http://www.jeyjeys-world.de/cgtalk/Elf_1206.jpg

[stenarts]

nice...very nice...like it...has something special and the eyes are catching me by the first image on...
dont like the metal ring on her chest area but she is on a very good way...very nice appeal

great,

STEN ;-)

[swag]

that looks really fantastic (nice girlfriend:)) the hair needs some work and the clothes looks like a rough start but i love this face :):rolleyes:

[JeyJey]

Thanks swag and stenarts :beer:
Yes.. the hair and chlothes needs work. :wip:
Its my first polyhair ;) ...its very difficult

Thanks for your comments :) and sorry for my english :scream:

many greetings
JeyJey

[akocan]

hi jeyjey!

Great progress but the top cloth needs a lot of work. and I couldn't get exactly what you wanted the ring on the belly to be...

Anyways, keep up this nice work!

Cheer!
:beer:

[Hexodam]

extremely impressive :D

[JeyJey]

some wires :)

http://www.jeyjeys-world.de/cgtalk/Elf_wire1.jpg

http://www.jeyjeys-world.de/cgtalk/Hand_wire.jpg

:)

[Sandpiper]

Wow. This is some inspirational stuff. The proportions look really spot on to me. I'm glad to see that you are trying some new things like the poly-hair technique. That's the whole point of the challenge right? I also like the idea of elves in a high-tech world. I'll keep my eye out on this one...

[Virtuoso]

Hey Jeyjey..............Looking good.Nice idea,good foundation.The modeling is looking clean and well done.very appealing. Also pretty cool twist with the idea. Perhaps make the nose a little less flat,elves usually have beautiful elegant noses,with nice longer type bridges.But she's your girl,it's a taste thing I know.Your doing good,plus your English is real good.:thumbsup: :beer:

[Apt Pupil]

Hey there JeyJey, it's looking great so far. However, it's hard to tell, but I find her cheeks look a little strange. The line that divides her nose from her cheek might be a bit to harsh, and her cheeks themselves looks a little flat in your last lit render. Otherwise, the body looks great!!

Keep it up Dude!! :wip: :wip:

[Kozlow]

Hi @JeyJey,
nice modeling, i would agree with Apt Pupil about the cheeks, if you look at the picture where she has a red hair, the cheeks shape makes her a bit older then (i think ) she is. If you could perhaps make those cheeks more springy but thats me so dont listen to me:) anyway great job, wire looks good and i like the hands with those long nails.
:beer: :thumbsup:
Take care and good luck
Kamil

[JeyJey]

Thank you very much to all :bounce:
I updated the cheeks and the nose.
You be right. It's better I think. :)

Now I begin to build some technical equipment. :wip:
She become an Jetpack, because a Elf must can fly! ;)

Much thanks, I'm happy about your tips!!! :beer:

http://www.jeyjeys-world.de/cgtalk/Elf_1306_1.jpg

[Apt Pupil]

Yup, it's alot better dude, she's looking fantastic!! No more comments here, I can't find anything else to pick on at the moment:p

Keep it coming:wip: :wip:

:beer:

[JeyJey]

Thank you Apt Pupil :beer:

Now the weekend is gone and I'm no step forward :scream:
But...today in the evening I have time to work on it :) :bounce:

many greetings to all :wavey:

[ChrRambow]

Hi Jens :wavey:

Good idea and model so far!
I like your character style.

The only thing i do not like at the moment is the hair... it is looking too flat ... they need more volume.

waiting for your next update. :applause:

[BladeFX]

Oops, missed this one. :rolleyes:

Great modelling. I love the headset :D
Noting the crit here :thumbsup:

[tonfarben]

When do we see any updates, Jeyjey?
Now the thread is the first again...hehe...
Really nice work so far. I like the black cloth a lot more. But I still think the pants are not so stylish as every other things...

[JeyJey]

I must leave this challenge. :scream:
I got a job, which takes my whole time.
But I finish this project.... later.

many greeting
Jens:wavey:

[antnik]

Hey JeyJey...Very good work... :thumbsup: Don't leave it man... finish it whenever you have time... Bye for the moment. :wavey:

[Franky]

This is looking quite good,I hope to see it finished sometime.Don't forget to complete her,I think it would be worth the time.:beer: :beer:

[tonfarben]

just let the pause be little and come back to work on her again...
:wavey:

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