"THE SAMURAI WAY" SHORT

[ctybarra]

Nice dude, just got some critiques for your animation:

Put more thought in your cinematography; the camera panning side to side in the beginning took too long and it was hard to sustain interest at some points.

Some of the Samurai's movements could have used some adjustments; for instance slowing in and slowing out when he runs instead of him zipping to point A to point B. And it's not too important but I would've exaggerated some of the arcs his arms made when he swings his sword, only because, well, let's face it samurai swords do have a lot of weight.

Design;
The monster did not seem to have too much thought into the design it just kinda seemed like an ominous blob with arms and eyes.

But yea awesome stuff man :)

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