WiP - The Fighter

[Rei Ayanami]

me thinks that you have the joint of the shoulder to far down, which is why it doesnt work. face looks like he has taken a beatin allready.

[Volcandro]

Very good modelling. Good shape !
Maybe you can see some references books at this adress if you wanna
www.fineart.sk --------------- very good place for human anatomy models.

[koinu]

Still think that you need to work on the cheek area and the neck needs to be a little broader..

[AmnesicElephant]

Wow, man! Muscles look superb. I still think the cheeks could be puffed out more. The hand looks really nice, too. It's coming along nice!

[Yoshua]

To TuLe

The cheeks could be puffed out more, but you may intend to do this to give him more character.

The neck looks a bit long or skinny and the sholder's are too far down or something, maybe this will look better after you fix the armpits.

Also the hands seem to be very large, but again you may intend to do this to give him more character.

Otherwise great work. :)

[TuLe]

Ok time for some more shots!

I fixed some things now. The hands are much smaller, kinda scaled in relation with the body. The armpit is more defined but far from satisfactory...

Also there's changes on the face. The cheeck has a new shape and size!

Please take a look!

http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter12.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter13.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter10.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter11.jpg

[TuLe]

Well folks, i did some major changes on my model!
Now i think he's starting to look like a fighter.

I changed the skin color, since he's face is a lot more close to Mike Tyson than Rocky Marciano... :scream:

Well plese, some replys with critics, sugestions and tips would aways help me a lot...!

http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter20.jpg

http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter21.jpg

:Thanks:

[TuLe]

More updates...
Again big changes... (for the better i hope!)

Please let me know what you think...!

http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter22.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter23.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter24.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter25.jpg

:Thanks:

[AmnesicElephant]

Mmmm... the corners of his mouth look wrong... too saggy. Give him a bit of a face lift, and he should look good. Also, he has a hole in his throat, hehe

Love the veins. Adds realism. Don't really like the moving of the nipples, though... I thought they looked better further out.

Keep workin it. It's coming along nice :D

[TuLe]

Yep i agree with you... Now that you mention, there's lot's to be fixed and improved!
The nipples are very odd i tink too, and the neck is a nightmare for me...!
Gotta see some pics before doing the next update...!

Thanks for the support AmnesicElephant!

[Hexodam]

looks great

few things that should help

the nipples, move them further apart, like someone made a drawing, the nipples should exit the body at a direct line from the spine

The neck needs that V shape in the front where the whatnots are :P

the curve you have there that ends at the edge of the mouth should go down to the chin instead.

just continue! :D

[Remi]

Needs more of a forhead....at first glance....looks like you know what you're doing though...you'll get it...keep em coming:thumbsup:

[TuLe]

I got some fixes up, thanks to you Hexodan and Amnesic!

Fixed the niples (They are much better apart indeed!) and added some details to the neck!
But the mouth still creeps me out... It's so damn hard to get it right... Please friends any tips???

Let's take a look... Shall we!!!

http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter27.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter28.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter29.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter30.jpg

Thank you again for the help!

[koinu]

Better !!!!! and yes the mouth is odd looking, the pose makes him look as if he's droppig the chocolate kids off at the pool.Suggestions for the mouth. Pull the lips back to the face. Or make the area above the lips bend towards the upperlip more.. Structure of the body looks right on...:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[Aluuk]

Hey good job so far! I think some of your anatomy may not be quite right. The thing that sticks out the most to me is this muscle.

http://www.sora-ent.com/jeffers/random/fighterquestion.jpg

What muscle is this? If this is part of the triceps then it is misplaced. The triceps all end on the olecranon process (the elbow.) If you want I can quickly draw you out the anatomy of the arm, or any other part you need help with...just let me know.

[AmnesicElephant]

Good! Face looks good from the front, but the profile is weird... the way his chin juts out like that... you may be doing that on purpose, but I'd tone it down a little and push the jaw a little farther back.

Gets better every time!

[koinu]

Originally posted by Aluuk
Hey good job so far! I think some of your anatomy may not be quite right. The thing that sticks out the most to me is this muscle.

http://www.sora-ent.com/jeffers/random/fighterquestion.jpg

What muscle is this? If this is part of the triceps then it is misplaced. The triceps all end on the olecranon process (the elbow.) If you want I can quickly draw you out the anatomy of the arm, or any other part you need help with...just let me know.
This is tru
TuLe: the Triceps-long head is a bit too big, scale it down some. Still looks like he's dropping a load. Fix that face...:thumbsup:

[TuLe]

Ok time for more updates!
Again i did some changes to the muscles, face, expression... hahaha "Still looks like he's dropping a load"
That's low... :surprised

Well i don't know, but i think this will be it for the upper body...
Let me know what you think!

http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter31.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter32.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter33.jpg

More images:
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter34.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter35.jpg

C:U:AROUND!

[UberMaximus]

Looks cool.

The bottom half of the skull looks like its missing meat. I think the chin looks very thin and fragile and would prolly snap off after the first punch...
More thickness in the cheeks, and more defined jowl..

But what would I know :)

[koinu]

TuLe, The arms are looking perfect, now leave them alone and fix that face. Any chance there is going to be a lower half to this guy??:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[Hexodam]

always improving :D


the face and the neck is still off

the neck lacks the V shape,
http://www.portrait-artist.org/life-drawing-faces-pics/colored-anatomy-neck.jpg
something I found that should help :)

also, about the face, the jaw is just all wrong, the end of it should reach further back, compare it to good references :)

[Goon]

Can he lift his arms? It seems like you haven't built in any armpits so in animation, things down there would get a bit funky. How will that work?

Otherwise really nice.

[TuLe]

Hello again every one!

You know what? I should change this thread name to "The 1000 faces fighter"... Hehehehehe
Here's another major update on his face, thanks to all the points you people showed to me...:bounce:

tessalated: Totaly agree with you man. His chim was the famous "Glass chim" (Have you ever heard this expression?)
One punch and that would be it. Now i hope his face is more prepared for a fight!

koinu: Thanks for the "perfect" part Koinu, but that's far from the truth! I did a little tweak on the arm, so now it look a little less "bad"
Yeah i'm gonna starting modeling his "down" part for sure, as well some trunks and gloves maybe!

Hexodam: Thankyou! I know there's lot's to be done, but as i improve the model more i learn and it's a lot fun too!
The img was dead... care to post it again?
Check he's face again! Hope there was an improviment there!

Goon: You're right. I'm gonna to some test riging tonight and see how thoes muscles behave. But for sure i'll have some weird results. Gotta think of that!

Puff... puff...
Well enough talking, here's the updates...!
Hope you guys keep helping me out!

http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter36.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter41.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter37.jpg

More here:
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter38.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter39.jpg
http://www.digitaldome.hpg.ig.com.br/images/fighter40.jpg

Thanks once more every1!!! :wavey:

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