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ajaykokate
09-26-2008, 10:26 PM
I am currently studying animation by my self. I was look for some advice or critique for my few animations I have done here


http://ak47in.blogspot.com/2008/09/pole-jump.html#links



thank you all friends

KenSaba
09-26-2008, 11:39 PM
Seems your shot miss some physics, but itīs a good start. Also, check your timing, thereīre some parts he seems to be floating, like walkin on the moom. Keep going, and animate the arms too. Regards

ajaykokate
09-27-2008, 01:18 AM
thank you
I appreciate the advice, will work on it..

ajaykokate
09-27-2008, 05:38 PM
few more animations this is bouncing ball with different weight

http://ak47in.blogspot.com/2008/09/bouncing-ball.html

lewistaylor
09-28-2008, 11:34 PM
Hey Ajay,

The ball needs a fair amount of work mate. Here are my observations.
1.) The first bounce has a fair amount of energy going on, but seems to
lose most of it as it comes up. Also, the arc of the second bounce doesn't
flow properly from the first. The first arc is quite short and high, the second
is very long and wouldn't happen if the ball was hitting a flat surface.

2.) Scale! Right now your ball appears to be the size of a beach ball, so far as
the amount of hang time at it's peak height, and the overall timing of the shot.
This is okay if that's what your going for, but if it is, then there is no way a light
beach ball would accelerate down into the first bounce that hard.

Hope it helps

Lewis

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